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We will not miss that bridge because we now have found the place in life where we should have been born. Looking back, I now understand our life before we crossed the abyss was necessary for us to appreciate where we are now and all the future holds for us. Comment by julih on 03/15/13 good story punishment to suit the crime Comment by Voorhees NJ personal trainer on 02/13/12 Read, of course, far from my topic. But still, we can work together. How do you feel about trust management?!.... Comment by viagra on 02/13/12 Not bad post, leave it at my bookmarks!.... Comment by followers exchanege on 02/13/12 Good post! Found a lot of new and interesting! Will share the link with others:DD Comment by cheapoair on 02/13/12 Thanks for the article! I hope the author does not mind if I use it for my course work!.... Comment by Buy oem Software on 02/11/12 e2usrE I would add something else, of course, but in fact almost everything is mentioned!.... Comment by Brandy on 10/04/09 A wonderfull storie that brought me to tears. Comment by Diane on 08/21/09 Words cannot describe the inner workings of my being, except to thank the author for the sharing of her Self. Comment by Alyssa on 07/30/08 I liked the opening statement and the story was very enjoyable, as well as filled with emotion. A fitting punishment for the crime in question, but good that after the initial shock s/he starts to enjoy it. The protagonist's challenges were all very real and you depicted it well. It must have been difficult to go through similar challenges yourself, but from the sounds of your stories, it worked out for you eventually. Another great read Janet ^_^ Comment by Molly on 03/13/08 Shades of Les Misérables, with someone acting in desperation, breaking in to steal a dress rather than a loaf of bread, to feed starving emotions. Just to put things in perspective, some people attempt suicide as a cry for help... This story truly describes a hero's journey, by any definition. Comment by juliej on 07/15/07 i stand by my previous comments a good story punishment to fit the crime what a way to go Comment by Stanley Morton on 06/29/07 Andrea becomes the woman she had inside thanks to her friends. But we know that it is really Janet Lynn Stickney that gave that speech. I believe that you gave your speech and your friends accepted the real Janet. Nobody can write such thought provoking stories without living them first. Janet, you have a friend here. Comment by Janice Lynn on 04/28/07 This is a very sweet story regardless of the crime committed. Andrea truly blossomed after she was placed into a position to do so. It would be so nice if all people were as accepting of those who are different as Andrea's school mates became. Comment by juliej on 06/15/05 a great story of punihment to fit the crime and then backfireing this is what he wanted all along and his mother helped him it was intersting that his father understood it easily great story welldone Comment by Jill on 04/27/05 I have read many of Janets stories, this one brought tears to my eyes. It moved me more than I thought it would and it gave me sense that there were tears when this was wrote. It is a heartfelt story that shows what happens when we take advantage of the opportunities. Comment by Eric on 02/01/05 One of Janet's better ones, IMO. I thought the ending was particularly good. Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/23/02 Somewhere there must be a boy like this out there. That I'm sure of. This story may indeed have a correlation to real life. It could happen where a boy gets caught in a situation such as this one and that's what I've been looking for all my life. Just too old now. |
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