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Sweet and Pretty
by Farah Daye

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Comment by Aleesha on 05/23/10
Surprisingly different. I enjoyed all of your stories. Thanks.

Comment by Angie on 06/22/09
What a beautiful, feminine world we live in, if only more of us were girls.
What beautiful stories, wishes, yearnings!

Comment by Would-be Latina on 02/23/09
Farah, darling, would you please let me share a fantasy-dream of my own?  It'll take but a moment.  Thank you........I want to be a young, lovely, golden-brown-skinned, brown-eyed Latina with waist-length raven tresses which I never cut, and over which I usually wear a black or white lace mantilla, especially to church.  In fact, except for my sandals, necklaces, and bracelets, all of my clothing/accessories are heavily laced, from my white puff-sleeved blouse and long, modest, sequined skirt, to my rich, soft, silken underskirt and mis braguitas dulces (my sweet little panties), which I change and wash regularly, especially when I have my monthly feminine flow of blood, as I have done since becoming a senorita at twelve.  Dressing como hombre (as a man) in leg-encasing trousers is absolutely out of the question, for I want to remain ever so hembra (fully feminine) and savor the delicious vulnerability of skirts.   I have a sweet, compassionate disposition, except for the very occasional fiery temper.  Whether I am married or not, I love everyone, and they love me back. Es tan bueno. I shall take the name Carmelita, Pilar, or Raquel.  Muchas gracias, querida, y vaya con Dios!

Comment by bill on 12/23/03
Swwet and lovely is the best set of short stories I have ever read!  Very very good job.  Look forward to more of these.



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