HprPUM You have noted very interesting points! ps decent site.

mdPZT7 Thanks for the article.Much thanks again. Keep writing.

I liked your story, it shows even an asshole can change to good with a little help from SRU.

Good story, I liked.
Kisses.
Silvia.

thought it a well rounded "pardon the pun" well done story  thanks for the story

I haven't done the research to see what the condition is but the story was good. Usually a visit to the old wizard causes unexpected results and this time was no different. But the wizard was kind this time and didn't create an oversexxed bimbo.

Hi Neo! Just looked over your story after seeing your post on Crystal's cyber-board. First, as to the story itself, I found it to be a very good read. Classic SRU characterization along with a hook that whips you in (pun intended) right away. A good read, and as far as I'm concerned, an excellent first shot at doing TG fiction.

Second, please try not to be discouraged by lack of feedback! I've been writing since last spring. I've now got 26 stories at Fictionmania, one here, a couple other places. My first two stories at FM generated just one comment each. As I found my voice I think my writing got better, and now, on recent stories, I've had as many as 17 comments--and as few as 3! I've learned that a lot of factors out of an author's control will affect the number of comments, including day of the week a story appears, how many other stories it's posted with, whether or not there have been stories on similar themes recently, and the like. So please, if you're enjoying yourself, and keep writing...the response will come.

As for Paul being the first to comment, I have to say I'm not surprised by that. I've often noticed him going out of his way to encourage other writers, especially newer ones.

First I thought it was a copy of a similar story I saw over at Fictionmania. While I don't care for the idea of the main character being thought to have a disease that needed a cure it was over all a good story.