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I wish their was just one swap, one of the characters turning into Vanessa Jackson and the husband and other character help the two people who swapped adjust to their lives and continue alongthe same storyline as followed. I think it would have been interesting.

Dialect is difficult to read in most stories, and more difficult to write, but it's carried off well in this tale. A story about body swaps involving not only gender but race is also a minefield, and that, too, is carried off well, though some things do tread close to stereotyping. The conclusion wraps it up nicely.
It's very unusual to read a T* story that takes a chance and explores non-T issues along with the gender swap, and that's one of the things that makes this story enjoyable. It's a break from the norm without breaking from the site's interests.
A daunting assignment for any writer to give herself, but successfully done. Thanks.
RJMcD

You done good!!  Got any mo fa us?

Its always a pleasure to read a story by one as talented as Raven, and this is no exception. The only complaint I have is that it didn't show what was going on with the lives of the original black couple who are now two white males, well not with much depth. Anyway, its just a small nitpick really and doesn't detract much from the enjoyment of the story. Thanks for the story Raven, I hope you write more soon.

An encellent story. Such a body swap concept would of worked well with my BODY GALLERY body suits.

I don't remember this story being posted or read by me anytime before. I am a big Raven fan, but your memory is the second thing to go :)

If this is a new story by Raven then bravo for a writing a new again.

If it is an older story then bravo again. I loved it more the second time around.

You won't be disappointed taking the time to read this story. Every story written by Raven seems to have a little extra edge to it. Raven does not write in a pattern. Each story surprises me with fresh ideas and concepts.

Now write more Raven your friends depend on it. We have gone on to long with out your talent. If you don't write more I could arrange a little car accident.