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She Looks So Natural
by Marina Twelve

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/31/09
Hi Marina!
One more time you wrote an amazing story. But one thing isn't right. a 15 year old boy don't have hairs in the back, shoulders, chest, etc... They are much young for this.
I love you.
Silvia.
Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 01/13/04
Dear Marina:

   Really, really funny! I enjoyed this fast moving and clever work. Please keep it up.  

  Hugs,

  Kristi
Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/02/02
Oh this was a wonderful story and kept me reading it throught my dinner time meal. Just couldn't stop. I like the whole premise of the story line and think you have a wonderful sense of humor to boot.
Comment by Danielle on 01/09/02
Very funny.  Kepps you  sitting on the edge of your seat wondering what can happen next
Comment by SassySue on 08/15/01
Very clever story.  I enjoyed it quite a lot, but I was hoping your hero(ine) would find out at the end that he enjoyed wearing girls' clothing, maybe after the guys in the car "admired" him as he walked home.  

Maybe you can turn the story into a script for that new HBO series "Six Feet Under".  That show's quirky enough that they might just go for it.
Comment by Andrea Foster on 08/15/01
Very good and very funny. Humorous TG fiction isn't all that common, but this is a fine example.
Comment by Briar on 08/15/01
Extremely funny and quite gripping story, and so different - I liked it very much.  Well written too.  Thanks.
Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 08/14/01
I wrote a grotesque joke a couple of years ago in response to a
contest, but you have far outclassed my poor effort & left me in
the dust.  Your story deserves to become a classic.  Beautifully
done!  Terrific!

Pervy
Comment by Nora Deret on 08/14/01
Marina dahlink,
You have a truly warped sense of humor.. It is twisted and strange.. and I loved every minute of the story.. Please keep up the good work.

Hugs
Nora
Comment by david on 08/14/01
Re the mortuary story. Nicely written and thought out. The ening was original and humerous. Thank You.


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