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Secretary's Day
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by crorkservice on 07/18/14
WcnUaZ Really informative article post. Really Cool.

Comment by Grayling Paca on 07/14/13
Thank you for your very warming story.  I feel that it is a little unrealistic as all the main characters are so well-disposed towards Connie and that she really would have had a harder time at school and perhaps a less pleasant reception when she started work.  However, I very much appreciated the absence of violence and bad language.  Please continue!  

Comment by Liz on 10/23/12
Holy cnosice data batman. Lol!

Comment by Rebecca Vittachi on 08/22/12
I loved this story.  I wish this had been done to me.  This had definately made me yearn for a different life path than the one I cowardly chose to take.

Excellent work, thankyou xxxx


Comment by Silvia. on 09/05/11
Conrad's mother, Mrs.Rule, Anita, Shirley, should be arrested and sentenced to death by hanging for what they did to Conrad.

Comment by Katie on 04/08/10
Wow !! what a great captivating story, so well written in your own seamlessly transitioning style.
Well done girl xxx
Now reading all your other stories but i just love the secretary genre, Any more like it?

Comment by cindy on 10/28/09
HI, loved your story, it was almost perfect, but you didn,t mention any one wearing pretty femenine aprons. I think feminine aprons add to a story. I don,t mean connie should become a maid, for her mother or MRS. Rule, but what happened to just wearing a pretty aprons with a cute dress or cute outfit. Just a thought, love cindy

Comment by Diane on 08/20/09
A true-to-life story that is as real as one can imagine it.
In many ways, this story is a good psychological study of young males in their struggle to 'find' themselves, especially that part that Society has deemed inappropriate for the male sex... the feminine - and complimentary - half of their nature.
You did nice work!!!

Comment by Aleesha on 10/27/08
I enjoyed this story. It is a pity that I could not have been more feminine in my teens. I envy Connie.

Comment by Mandee on 05/26/08
Dear Rachel Anne
  Been a while since last posting but I came across your story while perusing.  Lovely story if a bit unrealistic.  Unlikely that such a situation would not have gotten him very badly mistreated in high school by the boys, although the girls might have sought to protect Connie.  And the abuse would have continued unabated.  So, I feel that while I liked the final acceptance of the student body, in order that the happy story continue, it was not a true to the reality of  high schools.  Gwen Araujo does come to mind as case in point.  Never theless- I of course loved the story- and wish I could have had a mother, and an employer and girl friends who were as understanding and supportive as your story characters.  Thanks honey
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by Patricia on 12/29/07
The story was so true to life and I saw myself in it

Comment by Roberta on 12/12/07
Good clean story.  I enjoyed it very much.

Comment by Lee Lee on 11/28/07
I love this story   it was sweet  fem and clean   I want to be like CONNIE  I already had a mother who understood but I was too male to take advantage of her until it was too late   you are a great writer hon   keep it up   LL

Comment by Daniel on 05/26/07
A really nice story, but what happened to Shirley and Anita?

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/14/07
What happened to Shirley and Anita?  They were his/her best friends and they just disappear from the story without a word.

Comment by rone on 01/29/06
Super  nice  clean fun no cussing no sex  .....I can see a writer with talent that does not need  smutttttt to be as interesting..
well  done  thank you....  Rone

Comment by Bobbie on 03/30/05
Rachel, What a great story. I would love a sequel where Mrs. Rule takes him to her own personal hairdresser and has his hair bleached platinum blond, styled in a high bouffant hairdo, shaves off his eyebrows and paints on high sweeping arches, and then applies long, thick eyelashes. Then drives him to a nail shop for one-inch acrylic nails painted deep red like his lipstick. He must now learn to type all over again. A few more piercings on both ears plus heavy gold hoop earrings. Tighten up on that corset and get those shoes up to 4" heels. Sorry I've gone on so - you got me all excited. Bobbie

Comment by Nicole Ann on 12/18/04
What a wonderful story and a wonderful website!  Rachel you have a great talent for a story and it was a pleasure to read - can't wait to start the next one!

Comment by Helen on 10/02/03
Perfect fantasy. If only it were me for real!

Comment by Charlie Yarmel on 03/20/03
This was one(1) of the better stories that I have read.

Comment by Stefan Weiss on 12/12/02
A wonderful story. I've only just come to this part of the alphabet -you now have a fan.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/18/02
Gosh, I just don't understand how this story could be here for so long and not one person has posted a comment on it.

This is a great story and one of my favorites to this date. Rachel takes a boy who finds that he likes looking like a girl and dressing as one and finds him/her a job as a secretary.

He never apparently liked the other classes available to him in school so he had taken courses that parralled his mothers chosen profession.

Here he finds a wonderful job as a secretary with a wonderful and understanding boss who takes him to a place where he now is as contented as can be. A female secretary who relishes her new life.

Diane



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