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The Scarlet Ribbon
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Aleesha on 09/30/10
Another great story Janet. I love the way you transform bots ito beautiful women and Michelle was no exception. Thanks.
Comment by Alyssa on 07/31/08
A very sweet story that illustrates how one can find true happiness no matter how they live, where, or who they know.  I believe that if one wants to find it, true happiness will be there for them, it has happened to myself recently, in the form of a lovely woman, and I couldn't imagine being with any other.  Thank you Janet, for another moving story.
Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/01/07
Janet, wonderful story of rags-to-riches. Michelle becomes the daughter her adopted mom lost to the streets, yet the streets gave her Michelle in return. Janet, I hope you won your Scarlet Ribbon in life.
Comment by rone welles on 02/15/07
 Absolutely wonderful   .. what a lovly story a wish come true..
some times the dream does come true ...

<<thank you talented and great author for a fine clean story >>
anyone reading this will enjoy the child getting a home and a life at the same time ... a must read  ....
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox   Rone :)

Comment by rone welles on 02/15/07
 Absolutely wonderful   .. what a lovly story a wish come true..
some times the dream does come true ...

thank you talented and great author for a fine clean story >>

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox   Rone :)

Comment by Diane Sutton on 08/14/02
A boy who has had a hard life finds his happiness by way of the kindness of a woman who he really doesn't know. Although he has kept a secret for many years he finds that now he needs to bring this out to his benifactor who is like a mother to him

By way of showing her his sectret he finds she is more than just this loneley woman and his life changes for good. He finds not only happiness in this but brings just as much goy into his new mothers life as well.

I liked the way it ended with Michelle not winning the Queen of the Ball award. However, she does win the maid of honor and that is more than enough. Eventually her own adoped daughter wins the event as her turn comes to come out at the ball.

A delightful story

Diane


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