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Savannah
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Alyssa on 07/29/08
Wow...I didn't expect this story to go quite the way it did, but it was a pleasant surprise. Quite a bit different from any other stories I have so far read from you, great job Janet! I did feel a little sorry for 'Flower' at first, but justice was served and she deserved it. It appears to me that Flower learned humility, albiet in a rather drastic way, and in the end there she seems to have accepted things as they are. Freed from the constraints of her father-in-Law, maybe Flower can make something more of herself. It is also lovely that things worked out for Jill and Greg, the robins were a nice touch, great story! ^_^

Comment by Stacy Lee Starr on 07/31/07
I love the revenge angle. I hope Flower comes to love herself.

Comment by cyan on 06/30/07
I liked the story and felt that the revenge was handled appropriately. The story could use a sequal as to what happens to flower now and whether she truly comes to peace with her self

Comment by Stanley Morton on 06/26/07
Janet, you must be a "trekkie" the phrase about revenge best served cold comes from "the wrath of Khan." you can let Jill carry a fetus where her sister donates an egg and jill's husband donates the sperm. what about Flower? we need to find out how she fares too[ personally, I hope she claims the old man's business and correct the way that business was done and the alcoholic's can be turned into ladies too.

Comment by julie j on 07/20/05
a very intresting story well written &decribed revenge this is a great way to look at it intresting easy to understand

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Comment by Diane Sutton on 08/12/02
WOW, this isn't Janet or is it........ I mean if anyone has read Janet's more recent stories they will certainly be pleasently surprissed by this tale. This has to be not only Janet's first posting on Story Site but it shows a hidden talent that even I had not seen in her many works.

Janet goes a little farther than I could have imangined with this story. She takes a completely different set of morals into this story and gives us a fantastic adventure that includes not only the transformation of our heroine but, a side where the character shows a revengefull side as well.

Jill, takes all of her hatred in this story and turns it against the people who have destroyed her life, her family and those of others that had been effected by those who had destroyed everything she had loved.

The character Jill sends us on a marvolous journey into the depths of hatred and yet shows an abundance of love and understanding as well.

If someone was to read this story after reading so many of Janet's other works they like me would have to think that this was a completely different set of standards that this author has never shown us before. But, this story was first in a great line of postings and this is indeed one of Janet's best works. If you give it a chance and let it unfold you will not be disapointed in any way.

Ok, I did have a few places where it seemed like the story changed from first person to another character but that was not too much to deal with. With Janet you overlook these things as her talents over ride any mistakes that she may have made but the true greatness of her abilities to write.

Diane



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