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Role-Over
by Julia Manchester

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Comment by huberthowhow on 04/13/21
I really enjoyed this story. The change idynamice between Dale and Sandy as never brought home as clearly as when Snady first hauled the helpesss Dale over her knee for a good OTK spanking. Although there was only one other spanking described in the story, I got the impression from Dale's deference and reluctance to confront her spouse that a repeat performance was a constant possibility.

 


Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
HhIDD0 Precisely  what I was looking  for,  thankyou  for posting.

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
85s4lK Really informative article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

Comment by link building on 09/07/13
7DWq39 I think this is a real great post. Great.

Comment by Cameron on 03/06/10
Your powers of description are stellar. I have often wondered what it felt like to be a girl in various situations.
your writing makes one feel right in the midst of the action, whether shopping or being penetrated.Magnifique!!

Comment by J.L. Williams on 04/01/09
I loved this story. I bedroom scenes are magical...loving, tender and erotic.  You have a wonderful gift for beautiful, well written stories.  More Please!!  JamieLynne

Comment by Tiffany on 08/12/07
While at times this story bothered me with the way the male characters viewed women, i did enjoy the story quite throughly. It also helped me finally come to terms with something i knew deep down for some time.  The reason i was born as a male physically was so i could understand the male realm of thinking and use it for my advantage not only to fight for TG rights but also for rights of women.  This male chauvinistic views need to be removed from the world permanently they had a place in developing societies when survival was the only thing important to communities but for god sakes men need to wake up and accept that these ideals are no longer needed.

Comment by Lucy on 02/20/07
Thank you for a fantastic imaginary journey. It is a great story. You don't have the email of this witch by any chance do you. Oh well we can but hope. Laughing.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 08/20/03
still one of my favorite story sagas on line that I never tire of reading when I can recall the name.  

Comment by Joan on 01/01/02
This story is a true masterpiece!
Jules, you really know how to shape a story.  Your characters were believeable (and not all of them likeable).  You have a great talent for dialog and pacing.

When is this going to be published in the mainstream?

Comment by Steffi on 10/31/01
Kudos! for a masterful consistency in using associatively dissonant pronoun indicators of gender.  You carried this and the entire story off with true flair.

Comment by Mr Man on 09/17/01
I can honestly say that I've enjoyed this story from beginning to end. It's been fun to see the characters change and grow into their new lives. As for the final episode, what can I say. Julia pulls it off with the effortless grace a true master. Old questions are answered, loose ends are tied. If this is indeed the end of Role-Over, then it can rest in peace, full in the knowledge that it was a very fine read.

Thanks for the story.

Comment by Prue on 06/17/01
WOW, I just found this again after reading two chapters.after a long break i came back to finish reading them. i'm glad i did, this is a compelling story. one wonders about the outside influences affecting Dale and where it is taking him . well done Julia. PS I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS

Comment by Mr Man on 06/16/01
Roll over Beethoven and tell everyone the news! Julia's story is a hit. Its well written and fun to read, but so are all of Julia's stories. If this is the only one you have read, then you don't know what you are missing. I urge you to check out all of her stories soon. They are good reading and you won't be sorry. Hint. Hint.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/15/01
Really sweet and romantic ending with the bed scene at the latest part.

Comment by Gabby Campbell on 06/08/01
Wow Julia, what a tour de force! I had given up hope that you would continue the series, but it was worth the wait! Thanks, and please keep it up!

Comment by Terry on 06/04/01
Another great part, Julia.  It appears as if the changes have slowed down.  It's going to be interesting what happens to Dale/Robin next.

Comment by "Ruth" on 06/04/01
Great story. You sure seem to know the female response to every situation. Where does it go from here? Looking forward to the next instalment.

Comment by Jeffrey on 06/02/01
Well worth the wait!! Just when you think that you know where this story is going, you get a wonderful suprise. Excellent work.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/02/01
Long time coming and well worth reading.

Comment by Emma Elizabeth on 01/02/01
What a truly great story.  Please keep it up;  we're all waiting!

Comment by Jeffrey on 12/21/00
I must agree with the last comment. This story is truly gripping, the wealth of detail, you really come to care for and know Dale and Sandy.
I must thank you for warming up what is turning out to be a cold bleak winter. Thank you Julie for all of your hard work.

Comment by Terry on 12/20/00
I love this story.  It is very descriptive and draws it out in a very tantilizing fashion.  It's almost like actually being a physical spectator to this unfolding saga.  Which makes it all the harder to wait for the next installment.

Comment by Mr Man on 12/12/00
This is a really good story. I've been aiming to post comments sooner, but better late than never huh? Anyway, keep up the good work. You've got a lot of talent.

Comment by paul jutras on 12/11/00
Roller over 6 is the best part since it started.I like Dale wondering what Sandy is up to. Talk of Sandy going shopping and Dale getting use to being female now.

Comment by Jeffrey on 11/24/00
What a fantastic story. I consider this to be one of the best transformation stories on the internet! Excelent work!!!
I can't wait to read more of Julia's writing

Comment by Jed on 11/24/00
What a great story and story idea!!!



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