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Poor Little Girl
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Comment by jr on 04/22/22
I have read several of your stories. But this is my favorite. It has so much heart. Taking a 13 boy with no future, some good women gives him a home, food, and safety. Then he gives her everything he can, with love in his heart, then gets a mom and grandparents, finally he turns into a women then gits married and his grandparent a little girl with a "special" pandit. A perfect ending Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/31/09 A beautiful story,beautifully told and which moved me to tears, Comment by Trying to Understand on 03/26/09 I just re-read this story again. Again, I was moved greatly by this story. I have found it to be one of my favorites. While re-reading this story I noticed something that I wish the author would correct. Namely, sentences were started in the "first" person and switched to the "third" person and made it a little difficult to follow the sentence smoothly. The author would begin with I and change to him/her. Please correct this for continuity sake. Otherwise, there is nothing that I would change, a lovely story indeed and I especially like the ending with the "cross" a very nice touch. Comment by tryingtounderstand on 12/23/08 Just a lovely story....moved me to tears. Thank you for writing it. Continue on with such pure and lovely stories they will bless all who read them. I truly detest those stories people write of all the gross sex, but I truly love the stories where things are kept clean and on a higher moral plain. Truly this is such a pure, clean and enjoyable story. Again, Thank You! Comment by tryingtounderstand on 12/23/08 Just a lovely story....moved me to tears. Thank you for writing it. Continue on with such pure and lovely stories the will bless all who read them. I truly detest those stories people write of all the gross sex, but I truly love the stories where things are kept clean and on a higher moral plain. Truly this is such a pure, clean and enjoyable story. Again, Thank You! Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/04/07 Janet, one of your best stories. Raymond becomes Rachel and blossoms into a caring woman. In her journey, her grandparents find the daughter the lost to war. Then Naomi dies, and Grandpa lives to help Rachel become a full woman. His joy is made complete when little Naomi arrives with that special pendant from Rachel. Janet, I hope you have such grandparents. Comment by Rone Welles on 10/23/06 The most enjoyable stories I ever read come from janets mind and hand.... this is one of the best .... the ending is to dream of .. Comment by Jill Micayla on 12/06/05 I enjoy reading that which you write. I have not read everything you have written and I still am reading things you wrote. I like the story well,it was very heart warming and made me think of my grandfather who would have accepted me as me if he had lived beyond my nineteen years. That was 36 years ago. I still feel saddness and when Naomi died I felt a great loss. Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/26/01 A good story but, one that I think I had a little trouble with. Normally I enjoy everything about Janet's writing. Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 10/25/01 Janet, I can't believe that you've never received at least one thank you for this story. I first read it years ago on a different site. I was new to reading tg stores then and afraid to say how much the stores meant to me. I still have my fears but I'm getting better. Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 10/25/01 Janet, I can't believe that you've never received at least one thank you for this story. I first read it years ago on a different site. I was new to reading tg stores then and afraid to say how much the stores meant to me. I still have my fears but I'm getting better. |
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