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Paula
by Samantha Michelle

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Comment by Aaron on 02/06/13
This was good I really enjoyed reading it :)

Comment by Silvia. on 04/18/12
Very bad story.
Punishment is ok, but blackmail is disgusting and ridiculous.
Paul's sister and her friend, should be hanged for what they did with paul.

Comment by Stefan on 05/23/06
Samantha, really enjoyed this story. Many thanks.

Comment by julie j on 08/08/05
a story of experimentiation a great story as well &well written more please welldone

Comment by Rhonda on 01/15/04
Except for the parents and their treatment of the hormone situation, a wonderful story to read.  Well written and presented

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 11/29/02
Wonderful story!  Very hot!  There were a couple of points where I had to forgo believability, but then again I'll take sweet fantasy over harsh reality anyday!  Your form is erotic, tasteful and sweet.  I envy our Paula, and I wouldn't have complained nearly as much.  <<giggle!>>

It's a shame more of our sisters haven't commented.  Keep up the good work! :-)

Kisses,

Sissy Prissy

Comment by Nellie D on 10/18/01
A crime punishment story that has a few twists that make it different from the run of the mill story. It is well thought out with detailed descriptions and characters.



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