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Nice story, even if it's beyond reality from a legal perspective. I feel your story would carry much more impact if you could insert a few scenes about the "merciless teasing" that the other two boys(?) endured along the way.

Mariah

great fun  and learning curve reap what you sow a good story punshment to suit the crime

Life is for learning lessons and having fun, and not necessarily in that order.
The story is a great example.

I loved the story ordeal.

Another great read, you have a talent for writing an engaging story.  The ending did seem a little rushed, would have been nice to read more about how Diane's days were at school.  Keep up the good work! ^_^

DAVID WAS NOT THERE, HE JUST SAW THE TAPE, AS OTHER STUDENTS DID, AND EVEN IF HE DID KNOW, HE DID NOT DO ANY THING, NOW MIKE AND KEVIN DESERVED THEIR PUNISHMENT, BUT NOT DAVID. IF THIS HAPPENED IN REAL LIFE IT WOULD BE WRONG TO PUNISH DAVID.

David became Diane after the operation. THAT WAS THE REAL ORDEAL. Miss Janet, you need to tell the other boys ordeals and Diane's Becoming a woman. but then as a Southern Belle, I love happy endings

a brilliant story well worth the read this is the first time that i have read it properly it seems a harsh punishment but well worth it its a pity it was not me

David/Diane learned a very valuble lesson as a girl. The trauma of becoming a girl shattered his ego, letting Diane emerge. YOU GO GIRL!!!

if there was an operation you wouldn't be getting out of bed the day or two after.  you would be in bed at least a week, at least.  please be a little more realistic in the next story.

<<  Mike killed himself. He used a nail file to stab himself.  >>

What was done to Mike was extremely harsh punishment for a 15 year old, even for such an unfeeling invasion of privacy, particularly as everyone should have seen that the  above outcome, given the nature of it,  was a very real possibility.

Since there was no evidence presented that Dave felt he was in any way gay or TS prior to the punishment, his easy adaption to girl life and particularly his easy acceptance of dating boys seems unrealistic.  I could see it happening, but not without a lot of angst involved.  Also, the girl's acceptance of him in the locker room was way to easy, especially since they knew his girlhood was temporary.

I liked the story it was a bit rushed but the way it is written is great I look foreward to reading more stories of yours it looks like that daved really wanted to be a girl no matter how he said he did not want it

 I suppose this comment is better late than never.  I liked your story very much though i felt the end was rather rushed.  I am working my way through sme of your stories, if this standard is maintaned I may read them all.
Donna

To be totally honest I with the multitude of stories that I've read from this author this is the first that I have come across where anywhere in the story a little more graphic shall I say sex was mentioned.

I grant that it is not much but it is still there. Now that was a surprise to me when I finished reading the story.

There may be a few grammar or spelling of words that need to be looked at but, I had no problem reading this story as with all of Janet's they are a marvel of words that she puts together and gives us a wonderful story to read.

The story of THE ORDEAL is the first story that have read from this web site. I must say that I throughly enjoyed it the story of THE ORDEAL! The story is well written and very detailed. I am a crossdresser by choice, i enjoy to feel very sexy in lingerie and skirts, blouses, etc. I was also wondering, do you have any stories dealing with dressing in french maids outfits? Please do, keep up the wonderful stories. I look forward to reading more of them.