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Only For You
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by Capo on 07/09/12
I agree with the comment above.  Brandy has sold milniols of records, lol.  Her first album went 4x plat, her second (NSN0 went a gazillion times plat. Full Moon and Afrodisiac were not as successful, but ironically, those albums still sold milniols world wide. It's funny how people forget about how much success she's had.  The girl is a legend...but I'll agree that she hasn't been celebrated like she should be.  But keep in mind, everything that Rihanna is doing (endorsements and performing all over the place) Brandy did before she turned 20.  That's major.  I foresee her doing really well with her upcoming project.  I think it's long overdue and I've personally NEVER anticipated another artist to return the way I anticipate new work from her.  She is simply amazing!

Comment by Paula Mortenson on 02/10/07
Having just reread the story I am once again impressed by its flow, the description of a loving relationship and the imagination of the author(ess). Mindless cruelty or domination is not my thing either but it does show what could be achieved in a loving open minded relationship .

Thank you for the hope.

Paula


Comment by Susan Heywood on 01/25/07
Intriguing!  An original theme explored with some excellent writing.  There is just sufficient eroticism without it being sensational.  Whilst it always seemed possible to foresee the ending, you kept tantalising us with little glimpses.  First Rate!

Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 07/19/05
Another wonderful discovery; years after it was posted on Crystal's wonderful site - congratulations Brandy - another master,  sorry, mistress-piece!   I love the everyday married experimenters, the dialogue between them and the focus on hair and make-up.  The clothes are good,  but not overwhelming.  I lost the plot in the last three chapters though.  Why not continue with their obvious loving exchanges?  How I wish I could be in the McDaniels' shoes!

Comment by Susan on 09/01/02
Only For You is an excellant story.  I hope you will continue this direction.  Exploring the interaction of people who love each other in the context of crossdressing and/or transgendered deserves more attention.  The subject is more interesting without magic.

Thanks

Susan

Comment by Marshall on 11/01/01
Fantastic story.  i do not know where You meet the people that You do but they have to be real, or else You are simply a genius.  Or maybe yet, the McDaniels and Harrisons are the kind of people that we would like to believe in.  People who consider others needs, feelings, and emotions, and then fulfeel these with respect and love.

i eagerly await Your next lession in People 301 and thanks so much for  Your previous lessions.

Comment by Eve Adams on 10/26/01
"Only for You" was a fascinating, well written story, but it seemed to end rather abruptly.  It didn't seem to me to be an ending at all, more like the end of a chapter.  But there is obviously a lot further this situation could go.  Hope you are working on more of this couple.  They could turn out to be great characters in modern literature,  I'll be looking for more, as will many of my friends.


Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 10/25/01
A magnificent story.  I don't think I've ever seen this kind of
scenario explored before.  Vickie Tern's "Scenes From a Marriage"
is also about partners each of whom is doing what s/he believes
the other wants, but her couple are at cross purposes while yours
have nearly perfect communication.  Vickie's story is excellent,
but actually, given the choice, I'd rather live out your story
than hers.  I might add that I enjoyed the present-day, non-S-F
character of this story, but that's just my preference.  A fine
piece of work; my heartiest congratulations.

Pervy

Comment by Jill (wouldn't you like to know) on 10/18/01
Dear Brandy -

There is only so much one woman can stand.  Due to a power shortage, Crystal can't post the latest installment of your story.  I can't wait.    

Your ardent admirer and soon to be BEST friend,

Jill

Comment by AWolf on 10/11/01
More, please!  Write faster, or at least release more at one time.  I love your work, but the pace is maddening.

Comment by Henrietta Higgins on 10/10/01
Damn...Damn...Damn...Damn...
I've grown accustomed to her pace
She keeps me guessing what comes next
I've grown accustomed to the style
She is content to take awhile
No sex, no screwin’
All talk, no doin’
But yet, we love to read her stories
Her men aren't forced to subjugate  
If you're looking for some pleasure while reading late a night
The story will please you... but you won't masturbate
And yet, I've grown accustomed to her words
Accustomed to her style, accustomed to her pace
But I'm so glad there’s more each day; I hope it lasts until next May
Her joys, his woes, her thighs, his? clothes
Are Brandy's way to rope us in
I rush to check ‘What’s New’ for her
She's a sweet and sensual writer with a soft and sultry way
Keeping me on edge for yet another day
I've grown accustomed to the trace of her essence in the air
Accustomed to her pace

Comment by Joli on 10/10/01
You are such a tease.  Can't wait till the next installment.  Thanks for helping start out my day with a smile on my face.

Your friend,
Joli

Comment by Jill M on 10/10/01
I loved Lucky.  This one is starting out to be even better.  I'm gratefully hooked.  Your forward was a very nice touch.  Wouldn't it be nice if more authors would pull back the curtain and tell us what they've got in mind?  So far you're meeting your objectives.

Brandy, you're a fine writer...

Love.

Jill

Comment by Joli on 10/09/01
As usual, I await your next installment.  And again, as usual, I find myself drawn into your story as the man in question.  I love your style.  Keep up the good work.



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