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Miss-Indentified Boy
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by julie on 04/08/03
a fasinating story it was excellent that the sister helped her brother along as an equal as opposed to a slave ka wanted this to happen and with help it happened well done excellent writing

Comment by Diane Sutton on 06/13/02
I think that this adventure just shows the talents of a wonderful author and give us the reader's some great time and enjoyable literature to read.

Diane



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