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Mesmerized
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by Gopar on 07/09/12
Good comic.   I have my belly button, 2 on my lip, my eyerbow, my tongue, and 5 on one ear, 3 on the other. I didn't wait till I was 18 though. I'm 13. :S And my family doesn't aprove, but I did all mine myself, professional needles and sterilized and everything. None got infected. I guess I'm just lucky.

Comment by Aleesha on 02/01/10
I adored the story but I was saddened by the ending. Would Debi have gone all the way?

Comment by Sally on 10/19/09
A lovely story. Exciting. Thank you.

Comment by Jennifer Wilson on 02/01/06
My two favorite T-Stories are the author's MY FRIEND RICKY and MY FRIEND, and I really like MESMERIZED, as the hypnotic control and feminization is what I love and look for in T-stories (and in life!)all the time!  I would love for the author to write an expanded version and make much longer the period when the hypnotic control is taking place.  Perhaps a gradual taking control and feminization process. Extend out when Debi starts to realize that he is starting to gradually behave, dress, and feel like a girl.  He realizes that something is happening and tries to stop it, and maybe is even able to resist for a short time. But, the hypnotists pushes harder and harder and gains more and more control and gets the changes going again.  I hope we will see more and new stories from Ms. Johnson. I sent heran e-mail, but I believe it came back.

Sweetly,

Jennifer Wilson

Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/23/02
Nice story with a long way to go to a better ending. What I mean is that it can be taken much thruther into the realm of hypnosis and it's a shame that it has not been added to.

At 18K it sure can be made longer and that would make a very nice story even nicer.

I liked this story just as I have the others of this author that I've read.

Diane

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 02/03/01
Interesting story; I liked the opening.  waking up, completely dressed and completely convincing is a start for any number of story lines.  I wondered why he never doubted the idea that he couldn't be made to do what he didn't really want to do and accepted so easily that he was gay.  Was that also part of his roommate's conditioning?  I would also have liked the story to continue to where he was no longer conditioned.  Any number of story lines could go from there.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/01/01
another sweet story who makes one wonder if it part of your real life due to the DEbi name and all. I especially like the description of the character waking up and finding himself dressed up without knowledge of how and why.



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