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Little Barbara
by Marina Twelve

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/29/09
I liked the story, but I Can't understand how a 13 year old boy can have all this hair in his body!  (arms, back, shoulders, chest, legs, etc....)
I never saw a 13 year old boy like this one!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by TiffFox on 06/08/04
Ah, another excellent story

Seems like all the best writers are either gone or just working on one tale

Comment by Diana on 11/12/01
Love the story, hope you will finish it some day. It's to good to be left hanging.

Comment by Julie on 08/12/01
 You write extremely well !  I love the story so far.  I can't imagine anything more exciting for a 12 yr old boy !  

                               Hugs,
                               Julie

Comment by heather pinkowski on 08/08/01
I really loved little Barbara and want to read part two. Don't keep us waiting to long. your one of a kind when it comes to this kind of story. hope to see more soon!
love heather

Comment by Axanar on 06/13/01
I absolutely love these kinds of stories, and this is one of the best "disguise" pieces I read in a long time.  You ought to do more in this mode because only a few other authors have the flair for it that you do. Don't make us wait too long for part two!

Comment by John on 06/09/01
  Cool story, man...



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