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Comment by RoyalCBD on 02/22/21
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Comment by Rone Welles on 01/20/12 Timeless good story ... so well done that .. Comment by Vicki Stewart on 11/22/11 Hi Amanda, Comment by Vivien on 07/28/10 Loved the story. Sweet, simple and with acceptance and love. Comment by Silvia. on 06/13/10 Good story. Comment by Bruce on 12/02/09 Not much more I can say about how nice this story is but I want to thank the author for the entire body of work, all are nice and very entertaining Comment by MickeyD on 04/23/09 I loved the story, it was truly sweet and sentimental! Comment by Riki on 04/15/09 Lovely story. I especially enjoyed the English atmosphere, and the innocent delights John enjoyed as a young woman. It's as if cross dressing was a normal pastime, to be enjoyed by all. I know I would enjoy being in Susan's place! Comment by Sandianne on 02/16/09 How delightful to read a story where the women react with pleasure at seeing the crossdressed male. It was even more delightful to Comment by PDWJXEhbAtliYHYs on 02/14/09 979559750c Comment by hoolio on 02/09/09 1GJ5Z6 hi! hooli? Comment by JULIEJ on 12/31/08 A VERY GOOD PIECE OF WORK VERY INTRESTING AND SWEET STORY IT WAS A COMPLETE BREATH OF FRESH AIR ITS A SHAME THAT STORIES LIKE THIS ARE ONL STORIES AND NOT LIKE REAL LIFE HOW WONDERFULLL IT WOULD BE TO GO LIKE THAT INSTEAD OF HIDING AWAY ALL THE TIME Comment by Molly on 07/28/08 A bit difficult to read, especially in the earlier parts, because of the run-on sentences. Amanda seems to find her stride as the story develops, though, so that it gets easier to become immersed in it. Comment by dyan on 07/13/08 What a great story!! I've never real serialized stories until I came to this site. Part of the fun of the story was wondering what the next section would have in it. The two girls getting together in a romantic relatihship and Karen wanting Susan to continue dressing was a really nice touch. Wouldn't it be nice to find a woman who not only didn't mine our dressing ut actually enjoyed it as much as wee do. Comment by dyan on 07/13/08 more good details adding to the story and a relationship between the Susan who wanted to be a girl and the other girl. Comment by dyan on 07/13/08 what a great story about a teen age boy wearing his cousins' clothes his aunt enjoying what he had to do because of the storm. looking forward to reading the rest of the series Comment by carol Paige on 01/12/08 I think this is a beautiful and moving story. The feminine side is so strong that it must have been written by a girl Comment by Briar on 09/15/06 Spending some spare time on a rainy afternoon, decided to re-read your Lakeland Visit story. Comment by Jade on 02/01/06 Not a bad story I enjoyed it though it got short in a few parts and you could have gone differently with the accident it was still a great story. Comment by Amanda on 01/18/06 Thank you so much. I love these stories, written with a sensitive touch that they could have been taken from a “real life” experience. More in the same vein please. Comment by rone on 12/20/05 lovely wonderful story the best I have read in years.... Comment by Pauline on 09/04/05 Wonderful tale of innocence coming out without the usual hard sex that so many of these tales have. I do agree with several other readers though that two wedding dresses would have been quite something. Comment by julie on 01/28/04 a excellent story written very well and explained well it was good that when told they both remained friends and the best was that they tied the knot in reality excellent story more please Comment by Lynne on 02/25/03 A VERY PLEASANT STORY. WELL WRITTEN AND WITHOUT ANY OF THE USUAL SEXUAL TRASH. Comment by Stormi on 01/11/02 I have to agree with the previous commentary. I, too, would have loved to see two brides. Just consider the possibilities. Honestly, I adored the entire series though. Comment by Lisa Wange on 04/09/01 Loved the series. Comment by Susan Grey. on 12/29/00 Very good and I agree with the previous comment about the wedding gowns.I enjoyed this story very much/ Comment by Lisa Babcock on 11/24/00 A wonderful story of love and acceptance. Wouldn't it be interesting if both Susan and Karen had worn wedding gowns - I know that's my fantasy! |
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