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Comment by this is me on 08/03/12
I want to like this story like the last one I read but I can't. She committed a crime. Of course the guy really knew it was happening and put up token protest but any type of protest is enough to deligitamize the process used. Having said that the story really doesn't ignite my righteous indignation enoughy to warrant raking it over the coals. I think she would have been better off making it a game to him (the pharmeceuticals). Comment by Silvia. on 09/07/11 Angela should be arrested and hanged. Comment by skirtmaster on 10/23/09 Although I enjoy reading Rachel Ann Cooper's stories about turning Mr. Macho Problem into a Stepford Wife, which I think is a really great solution , I have often wondered about her boyhood and if her transition was as sweet and easy and as hidden as some of the characters in her stories. I have also noticed that her spelling, punctuation and grammar need some work. I know of only one woman in real life who was so enthusiastically supported by her friends during her transition. Most of the other transsexuals I know have had to face abuse so severe as to border on criminal behavior. That was definitely true in my case, beginning when I was five and going all the way into the military (I was drafted a few months after high school.) Some of those thugs were so mean that I still dislike them. Comment by Amy on 11/19/08 Thanks for a great story Rachel. A wonderful transformation. Comment by debbie on 05/23/08 i just read your story and enjoyed it Very well written and something I would not mind my wife doing to me at least in fantasy anyway .Keep up the good work. Comment by Patricia on 12/30/07 My wife has me wearing nylons, tights, satin panties while getting facials pedicures and manicures. How can I speed up the process? Comment by Cynthia Salon on 12/05/04 Wonderful story although I was hoping for a detailed salon visit at the end. Maybe there will be a part two? Comment by julie j on 10/28/04 what a way to go be warned if you are reading something about female domination on the net and get caught whatch out for yourself otherwise you might end up like jenson, brilliant story well writen more please |
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