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Hubble, Bubble, Toil and Trouble
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Comment by Miss Fitt on 11/08/16
A model of writing for wanabe authors to follow. It does not contain the bad grammar or ridiculous spelling errors common to most of the stories in Crystal's selection. The writer obviously planned each phase of the story before putting pen to paper and has used an amusing, witty style to maintain the readers interest. It was a pleasure to read, thank you. Comment by Jeff on 05/28/08 This story is the sort of thing that comes of giving a fabulous education to a complete and total nutter -- and I mean that in the kindest and gentlest way! :) There are quite a few stories in the various TG archives from across the pond, but none of them FEEL quite so British as this one. Perhaps it is the author's unabashed use of the vernacular, and particularly British turns of phrase -- which also prompted her to write a 'Britionary' so that we might have some hope of following along. Along with that comes a particularly British sense of humour: sometimes whimsical; sometimes bitingly satirical; often very dry; and always delivered absolutely deadpan, without the least hint of a smile. Comment by JosieP on 01/30/05 Absolutely brilliant! The most enjoyable read I've had in a long time. Thank you, Jennifer Jane Pope. Comment by Eleanor on 12/24/04 That story was SO GOOD! Comment by Aardvark on 01/05/03 I enjoyed it very much. Comment by Lee on 07/17/02 A wonderful tale and a refreshing change,, full of humour and a joy to read Comment by Francesca Barrie on 05/03/01 A very amusing tale with all the necessary ingredients, including a happy ending. I could not "put it down" so to speak. |
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