Cute story. But again, a boy gets abused because he likes soft pretty clothes.  He stepped down to female status and his Mom, sister and cousin and girlfriend humiliated him for liking it. They should have been encouraging, supportive, helpful.  Girls cross dress every day and no one says a thing - a boy shows an interest and he is "a girl" like it is a bad thing.
Typical girl approach - find a weakness and drill it home.  

If I was only him

Dear Ms. Happy Wife, I just re-read this nice short story. It's been a while since I've had time to read any stories. I still feel saddened that this event never happened to me. We can only dream and that's what Crystal's great Site is for.

I love girl-clothes and girl-shoes. I'm sure,  that your, "Pumpkin," character does, too.

In all your stories you seem to, "draw-in" the reader, me, to be tne main character.

It;s a shame that you haven't written any more stories in such a long time.

"Missy," Susan

I agree with your other readers, pity it was too short.

a sweetstory so easily maniplulated

This is a mother or a devil?
I really think she is a devil! Am I right?
Silvia.

Lovely story but what a pity Annie had to fancy another boy.

a sweet story more could be added

This was a nice story but I dont like the stories that force feminazation

Umm... ok if i was in this situation.  I would like beat the shit out of my mom.  lol not even joking.  Then again i wouldn't be doing any of this shit to begin with.  Funny story what a looser

Loved this story, no cruelty just enforced feminisation, well done

A wonderful story to read and one very close to my own humble beginings

Dear Happy Wife,

Yes, this is a different story for you. Except for the truth, that I had the, "Best Mom," for a Mommie, it was too bad that she didn't dress me as a girl. Years later, I found out, that I actually cried out loud in a shoe store when my parents wouldn't buy me some very pretty Mary Jane shoes for Easter. I'd seen two other girls in, "pre-primer," (too old for Kindergarten & too young for 1st Grade.) had worn those same, delicious shoes. It made me feel sad inside.

This story, as your others, is well written. You probably make almost every reader heartsick.

Sisterly yours, with a submissive curtsey,

Ms. Susan Pauline

the story good boy to girl transition in 10 min what a way to all over a pair of shoes pinched from his cousin great let the punnishment fit the crime well done &written you have a talent for this type of story please explore it more and go into things like a boy being caught taking washing of the line with out permission making things worse being girls clothers &then lying about it that would make a great story well done &written  this is the story well worth writing

the story is very good boy to girl transition in 10 min what a way to all over a pair of shoes pinched from his cousin great let the punnishment fit the crime well done &written you have a talent for this type of story please explore it more and go into things like a boy being caught taking washing of the line with out permission making things worse being girls clothers &then lying about it that would make a great story well done &written

the comment by Lurker is unkind and completely lacking any kind of insight my mother and father gave me two ways "out"  the hard way and the even harder way  rebuked and sissified in turns and finally shipped of to live with a strict auntie where i could could be helped by her experience raising four adult boys  i was repeatedly called sis or sissy in public places and in front of family and friends until everyone new my little secret finally when the youngest grown son of auntie asked me on a date for his job's annual picnic even the strict auntie said i had to go and relented she took me shopping for my own summer dresses and the cutest little girl's sunsuit, got hair and nail appointments for me and generally taugt me the ways of girlhood like i was the daughter she never had (we both were very happy that one summer) even though i never dated her son again, hey it was legal in that state for cousins to marry          

Wonderful story, wayayyyy to short, I'm gooing to burst in a second!
<<gooing?  How Freudian>>

Kisses,

Sissy Prissy
XOXOX

what can i say but WOW what away to go fancy beingcaught out like that with girls shoes in your room i would have liked for it to be hard and servere maybe throwing a tantrum a bit of spanking and being locked up in my sisters room well done more please

<<  I could make it hard or make it easy but it was going to happen. If I wanted it easy mom would tuck in my tee shirt, do my face and allow me to be as much of a girl as I could. If I chose hard I would be marched in just as I was right now.  >>

Great story, but I would have liked to see it done the hard way!

In seeming contradiction to the above, I liked this story because, while he felt humiliated, it seemed like mom and the girls were not being mean, just trying to make him get past the macho pose so that he could fulfill his feminine dreams.  My view of the continuation of this would be that he isn't made into a submissive sissy, but guided to become the  daughter, sister, girlfriend, and lesbian lover they each wanted him to be and that he really deep down wanted to be.

The only error in your story is you called Annie his "girlfriend." Wouldn't be more correct to say "ex-girlfriend"?

Davids mother goes to wake her Pumpkin for his 2nd sissy day. She opens the door quietly and then screams. There lays poor David, her pumpkin dead. His face is frozen in a death mask of utter depression and pain. The pink Baby Doll he was forced to wear to bed is now covered in drying congealed blood............

You said the story is departure for you... Nice departure.  :)

The story moves quickly, letting you feel how fast David's world is suddenly changing around him. The outfit descriptions were nice, something I always state is lacking in many stories. I especially enjoyed his girlfriend getting in on the act. The sales clerks reaction when she came up and called him by name was great!

I'd like to see more, with poor David being found out by more people.

Keep up the great work!

Demi