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Frankie
by Samantha Michelle

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Comment by Roger Overson on 08/02/21
Great story, except a couple of booboos.
When you get intubated, you are placed in a coma, so your tube gets removed when you are unconscious, not after waking.
Second, insurance will not pay out anything if the driver is drunk.

Comment by Davina on 02/21/11
I love this story!  I think it's because it is a nice mixture of the 'boy transforms to girl' stuff that turns us on, AND a touching love story.  I especially like that they get married as two girls rather than Ronnie suddenly becoming interested in guys as so often happens in these stories. Why does becoming a girl nearly always mean that you suddenly lose interest in other girls and lust after studly guys? Thanks for this alternative ending, Samantha Michelle!

Comment by Janet on 11/11/09
Surprisingly good, much better than I had expected.  Hope to see more of your work in the future if this is any example of what you can create!

Comment by Dianna on 03/14/08
I love your work sugar. It's really touching.

Comment by Rone welles on 12/19/06
   The bigest laugh is on the parents they lost a wonderful child..

nicely written senstive thoughful story with a good they lived happly
ever after ending .... thank you  :) rone


Comment by Nellie D on 01/23/02
A somewhat convoluted tale of a slightly built lad coming to grips with his feminine side. Then the accident that pushed things all the way.

Comment by on A somewhat convoluted tale of a slightly built lad coming to grips with his feminine side. Then the accident that pushed things all the way.



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