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Forgetful Francie
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Comment by India on 12/13/11
If I cmmonuicated I could thank you enough for this, I'd be lying. Comment by Sharon on 05/10/10 That was a beautiful story,in every boy there is a beautiful young Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/14/09 Loved your cute little story again and look forward to more of the same.Thank you so much and may God bless you.Alison Comment by Briar on 04/30/09 I remember reading this story when it first appeared, but just felt like revisiting it again today. It is as charming now as it was first time. Very well written, good interreactions between the girls and Mummy, plausible plot. Comment by trying to understand on 03/11/09 very well written....the flow of the story was excellent and entertaining. Many factors were included in a superb way. Please write more on this level and they will be read with pleasure. Comment by brandy on 12/25/08 It was a very cute storie,makes me wish I had sisters! Comment by Lorelei on 12/16/08 ADORED this one! Begs to be filmed. In the real world, of course, the family would figure out a way to continue the trip NOT involving crossdressing. But in the Storysite world, becoming femme seems to be the solution to just about any problem. AND DO WE LOVE IT! Comment by Vicki Stewart on 11/08/08 This is a lovely sweet sentimental story, well thought out, and very well written, I really look forward to a sequel, maybe Francie could meet up with Randy on another vacation. I look forward to more adventures of FORGETFUL FRANCIE! Kind regards, Vicki xx Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/10/08 Great story! I liked the fact that Frank wasn't a sissy and that he didn't dislike being a boy. That he liked being a girl also was a bonus and he treated it as such. That is how I feel. As Hannah Montana sings, the best of both worlds! I know it's been a long while, but I certainly would like to read further adventures of "Francesca" - As an actor myself, I loved Francie coming up with that name; she, and probably Frank, too, is a natual actor. Comment by rone welles on 11/25/06 Nice loving family ,, what dreams are made of .. you did this so well that it is timeless .....your talent is in your story telling abilitys and it shows in this story .. Comment by Kristy Lynn Fitzpatrick on 09/10/06 Definitely one of the better stories in my book. Cute, fun, loveable and so well constructed and the wrap is perfect. Have already read it three times and am sure I will revisit this gem. Crossdressing with no real embarrassment and reasonable people for a change. Excellently crafted pleaser. Comment by julie j on 06/02/05 this was a very good well thought out story well written the story was a thje right pace and felt good to read a bit of a sting in the tale as well made it into a great story Comment by Eleanor on 11/20/04 I thought that your story was really lovely. Warm and tender. I hope you write more gentle and loving stories like this one. WELL DONE !! Comment by Kristen Marie on 11/04/04 Great story! Awesome and fresh idea and very well written. Thans for sharing. Please do more stories. Comment by DAWN MARIE on 07/22/04 AFTER FINALLY GETTING TO READ THIS STORY IN IT'S ENTIRETY I CAN ONLY SAY THAT IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT. THIS IS MY KIND OF STORY, PRE-TEEN TO YOUNG TEEN, NO SEX, NO VIOLENCE, NO BONDAGE. I COULD READ THIS TYPE OF STORY ALL DAY. THIS PARTICULAR ONE WAS DONE WITH GOOD TASTE AND IS A SWEET STORY. KEEP IT UP PLEASE. Comment by DAWN MARIE on 07/22/04 FOR SOME REASON WHILE READING THIS FINE STORY, MY COMPUTER SHOWED STORY ENDED JUST BEFORE THE SECTION, "RALPH." TODAY I CLICKED BACK TO THIS STORY AND FOUND IT IN IT'S ENTIRETY. SORRY I MISSED SUCH A GOOD STORY THE FIRST TIME. THIS REMARK IS IN REFERENCE TO MY PREVIOUS ONE ABOVE. SORRY Comment by DAWN MARIE on 07/21/04 WHAT HAPPENED? THE STORY ENDED IN MID SENTENCE. AT ROADSIDE STOP MOTHER WENT IN TO GET... Comment by rhonda on 11/27/03 That would be a nice vacation,I like the part where the aunt perms his hair.hope his mother did not let him cut it when thay got home.nice story. Comment by dave on 11/19/03 Will Francie and Randy meet again ? Will there be some more kissing ? Will Frank ask his Mom about shopping for his own panties and dresses?????? What about her first Date? Comment by Steffen von Halenbach on 01/28/03 I like this story. It is one of my favouritz. Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/22/02 Well Emmie, this was a great story. But now you need to continue the adventures of Forgetful Francie. I am dying to find out what happens when she gets home. Please continue the story, PPPlease. |
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