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A Fantasy - Part Two
by Caitlin Rose

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/17/11
Disgusting.

Comment by WannabeGinger on 09/11/09
Caitlin,  you're one of the few writers that inspired me to begin my writings... and I've done quite a few now.  I love the whole story of Robbie and Betty.......  I perhaps prefer an older age group for my subjects but what the hell!!?   I hope this message reaches you and that you'll read some of my stories on Crystal's Storysite... Please lease give me your views on what i've written!  Love Ginger xxx

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/12/04
Robbie's a pretty smart kid.  Be a boy or be a girl but don't be inbetween, don't be a sissy!  You go, Robbie!  (You, too, Caitlin :-)

Comment by Jennifer Sue Aubrey on 10/20/03
I loved this installment of Robbie! I'm glad he was introduced to panties in this episode. They are sooo important the the total feeling of femininity. I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Comment by susan on 01/23/01
     Another fantastic story, can't wait for #4. Thanks for sharing such wonderful stories with us all. Please don't stop now!



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