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Disease Nullifying Apparatus
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Comment by Soni on 10/24/12
When I was a kid, I hated eating vteaeeblgs. One night brussel sprouts were the vegetable of the evening. I hid my four in a coffee can on the windowsill that held an avocado pit studded with toothpicks that my Mom was hoping would turn into a plant You know like all Moms did in the 60s Unfortunately, my secret was revealed about a week later when a very unpleasant odor was emanating from that coffee can I was found guilty Forty years later, I friggin LOVE brussel sprouts! Who knew they could actually be tasty! Thanks, my child! Comment by Maggie on 05/18/11 With the bases laoedd you struck us out with that answer! Comment by Calgary hotels on 07/04/06 Calgary hotels Comment by Home Hotels on 07/03/06 Best Hotel Home Comment by Brussels hotels on 07/03/06 Brussels hotels Comment by Copenhagen hotels on 06/23/06 Copenhagen hotels Comment by St Helier hotels on 06/22/06 St Helier hotels Comment by Melbourne hotels on 06/08/06 Melbourne hotels Comment by Geneva Hotels on 05/31/06 Istanbul Hotels Comment by Tucson hotels on 05/30/06 Tucson hotels Comment by Cannes hotels on 05/29/06 Cannes hotels Comment by Cologne hotels on 05/29/06 Cologne hotels Comment by Brussels hotels on 05/29/06 Brussels hotels Comment by Seattle hotels on 05/26/06 Seattle hotels Comment by Tokyo hotels on 05/25/06 Tokyo hotels Comment by Dubai hotels on 05/22/06 Dubai hotels Comment by Columbia hotels on 05/17/06 Columbia hotels Comment by Lourdes hotels on 05/16/06 Lourdes hotels Comment by Sao Paulo hotels on 05/15/06 Sao Paulo hotels Comment by Miami Beach hotels on 05/12/06 Miami Beach hotels Comment by Brussels hotels on 05/12/06 Brussels hotels Comment by Fort Worth hotels on 05/03/06 Fort Worth hotels Comment by Bangkok hotels on 04/27/06 Bangkok hotels Comment by paul jutras on 12/28/00 could of been longer but not too bad. The dream seemingly about to turn into reality at the end was a nice touch. Comment by Nellie D on 12/28/00 Not too bad of a scifi story but way too hurried and lacking detail. It needs to be fleshed out and at least twice as long, even as a dream sequence. |
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