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Comment by Berta on 08/27/22
Very interesting, so far, but where is the "rest of the story?" Comment by wendykhill on 12/05/19 I do so love this story and hope you can finish it off in the next few months as getting to my age the future is not reliable. so please if you have put the ending on another site please pass that on Comment by rone welles on 01/22/12 Susan was just kissed whats next? good story Comment by Silvia. on 05/02/11 And now? What more????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Comment by deanna on 07/30/10 sometimes stories are revealing and our true feeling are revealed and discovery has been made...and we experience a sort of bliss/high from this...emotions are fun when expressing is even better...cant wait for part 2...thanks...lol deanna Comment by Alesha on 06/08/10 It never fails to amaze me how boys or even men can get easily feminised. Thanks for your story. Comment by Molly on 07/28/08 'Mummy's Girl', and now, 'The Day'. If I recall my school maths correctly, two halves make a Hole. Or do they make Half & Half? No wait, that's a dairy product... Comment by Me on 07/28/08 The author writes: Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 06/27/08 When will you finish it? you are as good as I am. your humor is great. i wish i had a mother like that when i was young in the 1960's Comment by harry on 08/06/07 when is part 2 of the day comming out Comment by Danielle on 11/04/06 Hi Amanda, Comment by Bruges hotels on 06/29/06 Bruges hotels Comment by Newcastle Upon Tyne hotels on 06/27/06 Newcastle Upon Tyne hotels Comment by Colorado Springs hotels on 06/13/06 Colorado Springs hotels Comment by Williamsburg hotels on 06/08/06 Williamsburg hotels Comment by San Francisco hotels on 05/31/06 San Francisco hotels Comment by Nashville hotels on 05/30/06 Nashville hotels Comment by Venice hotels on 05/29/06 Venice hotels Comment by New Orleans hotels on 05/27/06 New Orleans hotels Comment by Dallas hotels on 05/26/06 Dallas hotels Comment by Granada hotels on 05/19/06 Granada hotels Comment by Budapest hotels on 05/16/06 Budapest hotels Comment by Anaheim hotels on 05/16/06 Anaheim hotels Comment by St Helier hotels on 05/15/06 St Helier hotels Comment by Athens hotels on 05/12/06 Athens hotels Comment by Tucson hotels on 05/12/06 Tucson hotels Comment by Brussels hotels on 05/10/06 Brussels hotels Comment by Vancouver hotels on 05/02/06 Vancouver hotels Comment by Niagara Falls hotels on 04/30/06 Niagara Falls hotels Comment by Washington hotels on 04/28/06 Washington hotels Comment by Charlotte hotels on 04/26/06 Charlotte hotels Comment by Portland hotels on 04/20/06 Portland hotels Comment by Hamburg hotels on 04/20/06 Hamburg hotels Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/30/03 << "Now turn to the mirror, tell me what you see." ... "Don't I look good." He said moving about to prove the image was real. "I'm amazed, how did this happen?" >> Comment by tv maria on 05/09/03 loved the story.i wish it could have been me wearing that gorgeous wedding dress and all the silky undies that went with it. i would be in heaven!! Comment by matt on 05/08/03 what a great story, i wish it was me in the wedding dress. |
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