Crystal's Story Site
·
Return to Story Index Page
·
Add your Comments
·
Story Comments by Readers
Corene
Latest comments are shown at top of page. |
Comment by this is me on 08/05/12
There is definately something wrong with using blackmail and hypnosis to feminize someone against their will. Comment by this is me on 08/05/12 I was just about to post a not so favorable review and I had read some comments and then went back and reread the ending. He was definately in a dream according to the story. There is no doubt about that. I like the story but if it had actually ended the way his dream transpired I wouldn't have liked the story. The impending return of his wife and his innate guilt at deceiving her pertaining to his cross-dressing caused his dream. It is really an ingenious construct. It makes me wonder if the author has studied psycology. Comment by Brian on 01/21/10 Nothing wrong with feminizing a man i would enjoy it. Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 10/22/09 Sorry, but your story isn't good. I didn't like! Comment by Priscilla Ann on 10/30/07 Corene got just what he/she deserved. Too bad it was just a dream; or was it, given the ending? Comment by DEE on 10/22/07 WELL WRITTEN AND VERY ENTERTAINING, BUT I WAS REALLY WAITING FOR A Comment by julie j on 09/11/04 what a way to go this has a very vicious revenge twist as well good story & very heavy its amazing with tiny camereas what you can do well done Comment by Sandy on 05/20/04 I like your stories. Keep up the good work. I like the idea of my wife wearing the pants in the family too while I wear her dresses, skirts, and nightgowns. Comment by Aardvark on 12/27/02 Nice work. Comment by Francesca Barrie on 06/07/01 Hard to believe that no comments have been made for over a year.I found this to be a well written and interesting short story. A dream which may yet come true, yes a good twist to the end of the tale. I like your stories ,are you going to write more for us? |
Add your Comments |
The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated. Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated. I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory. Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also. There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box. Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs. It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional. Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite. |
Please report any problems to Crystal