Saintly Lover

by Guardian Saint

 

Hi I am what you'd call an angel. No I'm not crazy, you never see me, or at least you don't remember seeing me. It is the way I work.

Let me just start by telling you how I became an angel. I used to be a comedian…not a very good one but I kept at it. Until I stepped off the curb too soon and got hit by a bus. It didn't hurt thank god, cause them things are huge….eh nothing, obviously I still try to tell jokes…and still fail.

Anyway I'm going to tell you about my first act as an angel.

 

Chapter 1

Alex (that's me in the white robe): Sir, I don't think I'm ready. What if I mess up her life?" Bill (Head angel he's in a white robe but he's got a halo to.): If you make a mistake, then it's your job to clean it up. In life you've always wanted to help people now is your chance. We'll be watching if you make a mistake."

Bill pushed me through the gate and I was instantly standing outside of her house. I took a quick look through her file once again. {Cheryl Dobbs 17, her boyfriend Harry Dwight dumped her for her best friend Simone Carrington and is considering killing herself.}

Alex: That guy sounds like an asshole! Well I'm not the angel of death so I'll just stick with being all nice and sweet."

I closed my eyes and my surroundings changed from the front yard to her bedroom where she was crying on her large bed and holding a picture of her ex-boyfriend and a gun. I quickly grabbed the gun and tossed it out the window. (Which we're not supposed to do, I was strictly supposed to talk to her.)

Alex: Uh shit!" She shot up to her feet and headed for the door. Cheryl: What the- who the hell are you?!" Alex: I'm just a friend of a friend. He sent me to talk you out of doing something very stupid." Cheryl: I have no friends; if I did I would still have my boyfriend. No one loves me no one knows how I feel!" Alex: Lots of people have been through this. Trust me….what if…what if he knew how you felt?" Cheryl: I'm not going to give him the satisfaction of knowing he hurt me." Alex: Killing yourself would have that same effect, but I'm not talking about telling him. Why not we show him how it feels." (I'm so getting fired) Cheryl: What the hell are you talking about?" Alex: I'm not really a talking kind of guy; I'm more of an action guy. So you just go to sleep and in the morning you'll understand." Cheryl: I'm not—" I touched her forehead and she fell asleep in my arms, I looked at the covers and they surrounded us.

 

Chapter 2

Chuck Dobbs woke up Friday morning from the weirdest dream he had ever had in his young life. Chuck: What a weird ass dream, my girlfriend was a guy and he dumps me and I was a girl? What the fuck would Freud think?" Leslie having heard what he said rolled over in her bed across from him. Leslie: Chuck what the hell are you talking about? Do you want to wear panties now?" Chuck: What? Fuck no, just a weird ass dream is all. I'm going to get in the shower…if you want a ride to school I suggest you get one to." Leslie rolled over and went back to sleep ignoring her brother's threats. Chuck turned on the shower and took off his shirt and admired his perfectly sculpted abs and arms that could lift 300lbs without even breaking a sweat. He quickly took off his underwear and a smiled as he rubbed his 6 inched dick to its full 9 inches. He quickly got in the shower and cleaned himself; he got out and got dressed while he waited for his sister to do the same when his cell phone rang. Chuck: Hey Simone, no I haven't told her yet. No I don't care about her, she's just a fuck to me, but I don't want to destroy my reputation, it has to be just perfect." As his sister came out, he hung the phone up and they got in his car and sped off to school. When he arrived his girlfriend Heather greeted him with a loving kiss as usual. She wrapped her arm around him and said her usual hello and goodbye to his sister and walked to class. 15 minutes before class he suggested going to the boys bathroom and having a quickie. Heather agreed, then again she would agree to anything he said. They rushed off to the boys' room and locked the door after making sure no one else was inside. She unzipped his pants and snaked his dick out of his pants and gave him a blow job for the next 10 minutes then ran to class.

Later at lunch heather hung onto her boyfriend when Simone sat next to her. Simone: Oh for God sakes." Chuck: Don't!" Simone: look bitch, chuck doesn't like you, your nothing but a place to stick his dick when I'm not around. So fuck off!" Heather looked at chuck. He didn't fight it just had an agreeing look on his face. Heather pushed passed her friend Alan, who just walked in, and ran out of the cafeteria and didn't stop until she was home.

 

Chapter 3

Once again I found myself in a familiar situation. This time with the now heather the then Harry for those who don't know. Alex: Sucks doesn't it?" Heather: Of course, why would you even ask such a stupid question?" Alex: Just curious. Look I'm not going to lie to you, you're an asshole." Heather: What?!" I touched her forehead and he realized everything. Harry: I…I suck." Alex: Yeah, you did I enjoyed the show you put on in the bathroom. {Harry had a disgusted look on his face} Look, you have a chance to make up for what you did to Cheryl." Harry: You mean none of that shit counted?!" Alex: Hell no! That's just a taste of what you did to her. I know there's good in you…somewhere, it's up to you to show it to everyone….mainly….Cheryl." Harry: If I don't will I end up a girl forever?" Alex: I'm not allowed to make any major changes. But that is totally beside the point. Inward or outward doesn't matter, you can change the outside all you want, but if you're still the same asshole inside then it means nothing." Harry: Who are you?" Alex: I am me, and I'm watching." I closed my eyes and I was back in heaven.

Harry woke up the next morning feeling relieved he was still his male self, Harry: Must have been a dream." It was Saturday which meant he had to get to work soon so he didn't look too deeply into his dream. He quickly showered shaved cause that's how Simone wanted it. When he went to his room to get dressed, he saw a picture of him and Cheryl. She was kissing him at the lake while he sat against a tree near a lake. Harry: Leslie!" Leslie: If you're not dead you're going to be!" Harry: Shut up! Did you put this out?" Harry handed Leslie the photo, she looked at it weirdly. Leslie: No…I didn't even get the roll printed out yet. How'd you get this?" Harry: I don't know, I thought you didn't need it for class and left it out for me or something." Harry looked up, pushed past Leslie and ran to his car and drove off to Cheryl's.

 

Chapter 5

Cheryl sat on the front porch on the swing with her friend Alan who was trying to comfort her when Harry pulled up and jumped out of his car. Alan: No way dude, she doesn't want to talk to you." Harry: Look I just want to apologize to her ok." Alan: Not gonna happen." Cheryl: Alan, let him speak." Harry:…I…I'm sorry, I know I hurt you and there's nothing I can do to make it right. I know that things will never be the same between us. But I truly am sorry." Cheryl looked at her feet, and then got up to him. Cheryl: Did you even care at all?" Harry: I thought I didn't…but I do." Cheryl walked back onto her porch and Harry left, Alan sat next to Cheryl again when he saw a piece of paper sitting in his lap "kiss her you idiot" Alan kissed her and bill turned off the viewer. Bill:… Not the way you were supposed to handle it." Alex: I hope there's a but coming." Bill: But, it works. 3 birds with one stone…nice work." Alex: Now, about this outfit."

 

Prelude

Harry eventually broke up with Simone, after she confessed she had no more interest in men but wanted to be one {I swear I don't know how that happened (evil grin)}. So she moved to New York and now lives as Simon. As for Cheryl she returned Alan's kiss and they dated the rest of the year, until college when they got married and had 3 kids after graduating. Somehow they managed to balance their time with their kids and work. (Must have been that lotto ticket that told Alan to propose I don't know how that got their^^) As for Harry himself, his basketball career didn't work out so he became a minister at the advice of his wife Lorie.

The end

 

Ok this is the part where I beg you to reply with thoughts and ideas on my story….so….. (Gets on knees) pleeeeeeeeeeeease perty please with sugar on top! K now that that's out of the way, if any of you wish to continue on with the story you may, there are a few things I ask. 1 let me know so I can read it^^.

Spidy81487@centurytel.net you can also email me if you just want to ask me about myself haha

2 Alex is the only angel who does what he does, (it's why he's cool…to me) so he's got to be the main angel but not the main character. 3 no one can see him unless he wants to be seen.

I hope you haven't changed your mind about writing it lol

  

  

  

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