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You Know, It Wasn't That Bad
by Marnie Smith

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Comment by Dee on 05/20/22
Must be some weired sick wife's out there and even weireder husband's.

Comment by Missy Susan Pauline on 01/16/11
Dear Miss Marnie, I liked this story the best of all. The back-ground of your central characters, the descriptions of all the garments and the, "inside," feelings of the main Wife-husband team.

The blending in of their daughter's feelings was a beautiful touch.

Again a, "Well Done."

My Wife is not as kind. She keeps me, Her Housemaid/husband, in my Housemaid's Uniform Dress and heels. However, I'm not permitted to wear my wigs nor make-up except for my Mac, "Russian Red," lipstick. She likes to keep me in a, "guy in a dress," mode. All our neighbors, the local stores, as well as the Laundromat know me in that way, too. My Mistress/Wife even had my name, "Missy Susan" embroidered on my Uniform's left breast. One day, at the laundromat, a little girl asked me, "Why are you dressed like that?" I told her, "I dress the way my Wife tells me to," (dress).

I could identify with your central characers. I enjoyed reading your stories.

Missy Susan


Comment by Silvia. on 11/03/09
I'm sorry, but that is a bad story.
Chris's wife made what she wanted and he did what she wanted, she made him dress as a woman.
He might say simply that he wouldn't dress like a woman, and she decide with Mrs. Beakman and not him, she made the call, not him.
Silvia.

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 01/01/09
Hi Marnie,
Yet another very good story, I really enjoyed it, I think 'Chris' really learned a lesson in femininity after starting off so macho.
Kind regards. Vicki xx

Comment by Julie on 07/29/05
Cute story ... but could use a little more detail. and the switching back and forth of the panyhose is improbable.  The husband would have complained about the lack of organization .. all the outfits needing black PH should have been tried before switching colors .. and the wife would agree ... each time you put on or remove pantyhose there is the possibility of causing a run ... ruinng them ... nice tale though.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/29/01
Very good story that only needs a little touch up with the grammar. Other than that I liked the begining and the ending. I hope you continue to write more stories for us to read.

Comment by Axanar on 03/17/01
So nice to see a realistic, G-rated story, funny and tasteful.

Comment by emmie dee on 12/29/00
Thanks for a plausible, enjoyable story involving a husband and wife in a growing relationship.

Comment by Connie Grant on 12/29/00
A delightful story, I love stories of loving exploration between husband and wife.  I second Marti B's call for more.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 12/28/00
a nice story. I especially like the tripping over heels and arguements about being properly dressed.

Comment by Nellie D on 12/28/00
A very nice story about a husband learning a little of how the other half lives.

Comment by Marti B on 12/28/00
A very pleasant and interesting story.  Leaves the door open for further adventures...please.



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