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Comment by Amy Sadler on 08/03/08
A good list and a constructive one. But the list does not leave too much for the imagination to work with. As good an as indeed important story building is, or how believable, all relieghs on the individual author. When and ehere something is important to the story, weather that be the character, the back story etc, then these things do need to be developed. Comment by rone welles on 06/05/07 Some of the list is good but all characters are not full time in the story .. some are there for background and setup the story for the main thought to be conveyed and the background characters do not need all this list at all ... some of my stories have a high school full of kids .. that is the background plan when the main character is pushed or shoved into a locker by the rush of the kids ...you don,t have to name every kid in the hall at the time .. there would never be a short story .. thank you for your thoughts ...Rone Comment by Ellie Dauber on 02/12/01 That's quite a list, and I don't think I could answer anywhere near even half of those questions about any of my characters, including those in my longest stories, like "Purse Snatcher" or "Girl for a Spell." |
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