You wrote a very credible account of this "new girl's" induction to the world of women. I am about to read your other story. Best wishes, Sonia

dEMZ4X Very good article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool.

I've always wanted to be in a situation like this.  Really entv you.

oooooh! how I wish the staff I worked with had taken me down this road one Halloween.......  Loved it!  xxx WbG

sure makes you wounder some of us work a life time just to pass an this guy perfect in a month!!

Both of your stories ar every good. NO presure, no sex and no violence.
Thank you and keep writing.

Redstone

Here's a copy of an e-mail sent to the author but the e-mail came back as not being able to be delivered.  Susan 3/8/03

Dear Vicki,

I just posted my comments after reading your beautiful story. So well written and this girl got so involved with Vicki's development, that I forgot that I was Susan. A girl who has her wife apply her eye-liner as her hands are not that steady anymore. I do hope that you will write about Jim's transition to Vicki if that is what you'd like to do. I was also glad to read that one of the genetic girls had the maid costume rather than the t-girl. Although I do have three of my own maid costumes. Well, two are costumes and one is real maid's uniform. Three Halloween's ago, my wife and I were both, "French Maids," as we answered the door. The neighbors came back to take pictures!

I do hope that your e-mail is still good and that you aren't too busy to write back.

Your, "Storysite," fan,

Susan Pauline Bauer
(Brockton, Massachusetts)

Dear Vicky,

I, "loved," your story! It was so well written. The characters developed nicely. I was wishing, that I was that person, as I was so, "wrapped up," in your story. The descriptions and the detail were well done. I've only just started to read some of these stories and yours has to be one of the best. You have used well the addage, "sex is between the legs and gender is between the ears." However, this beautiful story has kept me up an hour past my bedtime and it was time well spent. Please write more about Vicki and her role in Jim's life as it develops. The story, that I've written is going back, "to the drawing boards," for greater detail and more character thinking.

Susan

Truly a nice story that was very easy to read. I liked the way the girls at the office helped out with the transformation in order to give the final effect for the party. And the ending made it clear that this author can and should continue with either this or another story.

I would have even enjoyed it more if it was longer as this is one of the stories types I do so love to read.

For those who are looking for a way to relax and enjoy a nice story this is one you should not pass up.

what a wonderful story. i really enjoyed as it touched on a lot of my fantasies. please write a sequil or more stories. you really are very good at this.       thank you

I enjoyed every line and every minute of the story... thanks

I thought this was absolutely wonderful.  I have a thing for femdom, especially in an office setting, but this was just as delightful without that, and actually the clear consensual nature made it even more entertaining.  I have to admit it would be interesting to see him come to work, en femme a bit more often. But it's as much fun this way since this was obviously not one of those creepy chauvinistic males but one who had a respectful, affectionate non-sexual relationship with his female co-workers.  It reminds me of a great Nifty story, "As Good As A Woman," a piece of consensual office CD/TV with a similar tone.  In any case, I hope Vickie returns someday soon.

A lovely, gentle story of consensual cross-dressing, written with a good eye for detail and description, and good humor. I feel like I know and like all the main characters. Hugs, Emmie

Very nice story.  I thought you were going to end it with him getting home and finding he didn't have the adhesive to take off the breasts or the equipment to remove the nails.  "Guess Vicki will have to go to work tomorrow."  he thought.  "Damn!  It's a dirty job, but..."
Congratulations on a great first (?) effort.
                                            Jezzi

WELL!!!  A new author, huh?  You're kidding, right?  From the look of this story, you have written before.  But, in any event, I don't usually do many of these replies.  I felt that I had to after reading this story.  You have a very nice touch and I was VERY pleased that this story didn't degenerate into the usual humiliation/forced fem area as so many of these types of stories do.  A very nice job, and a big thank you for writing a pleasant tale.  Keep up the good work.  You have a future doing this writing thing.  Well done, and welcome to the ranks here at Crystal's.
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