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The Wish Touch
by Pial Aryan

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Comment by Silvia. on 01/30/12
Very, very bad story!

Comment by Dianna on 03/25/08
Murderess' again.
I really don't understand why people are so fixated on killing people!

Comment by Jess on 10/22/07
If you can overcome the complete lack of grammar and coherent thought you may just last long enough to be completely disgusted.

Comment by sara c on 01/26/01
Wow, a really good, genuinely enjoyed story!!!!!!  I'm looking forward to more from this writer.

Comment by Paul1954 on 01/25/01
I enjoyed this story, at least the first 75% of it. THe changeof Alex was nicely handled and also Sandra.

I think it lost its way a little though, and found the ending curiously unsatisfying.

A good effort though, and I look forward to reading more

Comment by Mr Man on 01/24/01
This was a very entertaining and well written story. I look forward to your next one. Good job and thanks for writing!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/23/01
A truely different type of TURN INTO FEMALE CLOTHING story. Quite different in the way it remind me of some mannequin stories I've read in the best. Enjoyed this.



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