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A Wish?
by Autumn Winters

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/25/10
Bad.

Comment by Mr Man on 05/17/01
This was a really good essay, and perhaps some of the finest writing this site has ever seen. It kind of reminded me of the old song "Imagine". I hope you find what you're looking for and I'm glad you posted this. Thanks.

Comment by Deb on 05/16/01
Excellent!

I agree with most of your comments (although I wouldn't ever wish for death; not because I fear death, but because I enjoy life, and there are so many things I have yet to do, books to read, projects to finish, places to see, people to love, etc.).

I like the idea of wishing that everyone would be free to be themselves, to wear what they want when they want, to have true personal freedom. My wish would be that you get your wish. :)

Thank you ;)

Comment by Mina on 05/16/01
Bravo, The very type of thing that this place needs, a literary and self analysing jewel. Emotion and Intelligence and a self awareness that more than a few could prosper from.Thank you for sharing this extremely personel work......Greatest Respect Mina



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