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Comment by Mathias on 10/23/12
Articles like this really grease the sahfts of knowledge. Comment by Lorelei on 04/19/08 Nice romp. "Lisa" is so fortunate to have parents who will let him be a girl almst on the spur of the moment without fear or retribution in order to have extra enjoyment and open whole new dimensions of life experiences. Especially enjoyed the description of Lisa's darling little skating skirt with its "built-in" overpanty; I didn't know they were made that way.(Brought back memories of a scene in J. D. Salinger's "The Catcher in the Rye".) Now I realize what majorettes and cheerleaders have on under their teeny skirts. Must be thrilling to wear them, whether over bare legs, pantyhose, or tights. Comment by DAWN MARIE on 09/15/04 LOVED YOUR STORIES ABOUT LISA. WAS A BIT SURPRIZED WHEN HE MET UP WITH DONNA (I THINK I REALISED IT WAS THE SAME DONNA FROM YOUR OTHER STORIES RIGHT AWAY.)I SAID TO MYSELF, AT THE END, I WOULD LIKE TO READ ABOUT THE SLEEPOVER. LO AND BEHOLD, WHEN I WENT BACK TO YOUR PAGE, THERE IT WAS. Comment by Annie O on 06/22/01 The only really bad part: "This is a work of FICTION." Comment by Tinastearn on 06/05/01 Please add another chapter. I just love your characterization and the relationships you have developed in the stories. Time to take it to the next step girlfriend Comment by BILLYJEAN on 03/27/01 I love your stories. I only wish my dreams would Comment by emmie dee on 12/22/00 I love these tender and sensitive stories, and it was a pleasant surprise to see Lisa ELizabeth's and Donna Ann's stories come together. It will be fun to see how this series develops! Comment by Lisa Elizabeth on 12/21/00 Thank you both for the comments. I appreciate the feedback. Comment by tina browning on 12/18/00 I feel you are doing just a marvelous job with all your John/Lisa and Donna Marie stories! It's great fun to see them coming together here as new friends, and I look forward to more episodes. As transgender themes become more popular all across society, it's as though we're able to move toward more tolerance and 'experimentation' on multiple levels. Comment by paul jutras on 12/17/00 Winter Fun was good though if I was John I wouldn't go OH MOM'S A GIRL and just follow her lead. My mom is such a tomboy that I wouldn't want to pick her for a feminine roll model. The story itself was good reading. |
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