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Winner Takes All
by Way Zim

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Comment by Sasan on 10/23/12
I went to see The Just Price of Flowers on Saturday, and just wanted to feed back how much I enyeojd the show.It appears that the 80 s are well and truly on trend at the moment:  batwing sleeves, neon bright accessories, leggings and now   thoughtful, provocative, timely and urgent theatre of a political nature that's also entertaining.  I don't think I've really seen a piece like this for 15 years.  If the financial crisis means that there may be more theatre like this then at least there's a silver lining to the fiscal cloud.It reminded me of being a student again (except that the writing and acting were better):  but I haven't seen work that is fresh, reactive to a situation but also reflective of it for some time.  Not in that context (not in any context).  And it did help that we were huddled in the space with little heating and a sleeping bag for warmth.  It added to the experience.  It was a testiment to the writing and performing that I genuinely didn't notice the impending cold.I'd love to see this work elsewhere.  There must be a disused warehouse in the City that could house this work:  I'd like to see all the Lehman Brothers, RBS, TSB and other City types have a chance to see this.  Perhaps the ticket price could be  0.1% of your bonus .  That might push the piece into solvency.

Comment by Jason on 07/09/12
I went to see The Just Price of Flowers on Saturday, and just wanted to feed back how much I enyojed the show.It appears that the 80 s are well and truly on trend at the moment:  batwing sleeves, neon bright accessories, leggings and now   thoughtful, provocative, timely and urgent theatre of a political nature that's also entertaining.  I don't think I've really seen a piece like this for 15 years.  If the financial crisis means that there may be more theatre like this then at least there's a silver lining to the fiscal cloud.It reminded me of being a student again (except that the writing and acting were better):  but I haven't seen work that is fresh, reactive to a situation but also reflective of it for some time.  Not in that context (not in any context).  And it did help that we were huddled in the space with little heating and a sleeping bag for warmth.  It added to the experience.  It was a testiment to the writing and performing that I genuinely didn't notice the impending cold.I'd love to see this work elsewhere.  There must be a disused warehouse in the City that could house this work:  I'd like to see all the Lehman Brothers, RBS, TSB and other City types have a chance to see this.  Perhaps the ticket price could be  0.1% of your bonus .  That might push the piece into solvency.

Comment by DarkLight on 05/21/01
*applause*  *thunderous applause*

A very well written work!  Please continue and let us have MORE!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/16/01
a bit on the long side to truely hold my interest since I prefer reading the short length stories I write. The concept of the tale was a wonderful idea and what I read quite enjoyable.



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