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Where No Man Has Gone Before
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/24/10
I really think this is a bad, bad, bad story.
Silvia.

Comment by Marti B on 01/08/01
Paul,

   I like the storyline very much.  The story flowed very well and, following the recent postings on the cyber board there were few spelling errors.

   I did feel that the story needed more substance between the scenes that were described as well as a little bit of consistency.  For example, even though the ship's crew were changed their clothes should have remained the same.  

    All things considered, this was a very good short story that could also be expanded into a longer adventure.



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