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Woman's Help Corporation - The Beginning
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Dian on 07/09/12
Keep on wiritng and chugging away!

Comment by Diane on 05/31/08
Thank you!
A great beginning for a great concept; the WHC concept should become worldwide.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/12/08
The story of the formation of WHC and the punishment chosen for Brenda, Samantha, Carla and Natalie was perfectly delicious. Such poetic justice is rarely meted out in the courts. It is too bad Leslie was so kind in letting the four "girls" not recall who they really were except under certain circumstances. They would've suffered even more greatly had they been left with full memories, but no way to control their actions. Be that as it may, a marvelous take of justice and revenge.  

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