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WHC - Equal Opportunity for Both Sexes
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Diane on 05/31/08
Ahhh! that's what we need: more WHC's to even the score(s) of discrmination.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/01/04
Jennifer, I like your stories, they make me think.

Both Barbara and James said they still loved their spouses, and   said all they wanted was to 1) have the beatings stop, 2) have them out of their lives 3) but still be around for the kids.
All three goals were met by the initial changes.  If they still loved their former spouses, why make them hate each other when it was unnecessary to achieve the three goals?  If they wanted them around for the kids, why make them penniless, homeless, and unhappy, unable to help the kids? Not only was this unnecessary, but it would be counterproductive to goal 3.  Was this the WHC going against Barbara and James' wishes because the WHC felt punishment was necessary?

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