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by Pink Mia

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/12/10

Comment by Meghan B on 12/19/05
I like hypnosis stories, and this one I ABSOLUTELY LOVED

Keep up the good work Pink Mia

Great Story, hopeing that there is more of these on the web

Comment by Diane Sutton on 01/13/02
I just adore this type of story and it was well written with both enough content and length to keep me satisfied.

I hope to read more of this authors stories as I think she has some talent for writing and since they do so seem to fit into the subject  matter I so love to read they will surely give me pleasure.

A very enjoyable tale.

Comment by DarkLight on 08/13/01
An excellent story -- very well written.  I hope there will be many more to come.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 08/12/01
Gr-r-r-eat story!  Could you please post the URL of that website
for the rest of us?  [grin]


Comment by marsha on 08/12/01
i really enjoyed this story and hope you will put somemore parts to this story.

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