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Velvet Trap
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/14/11
The mother of Gary and Amy should be transformed into men and be sentenced to life imprisonment without parole.
Ugly and disgusting story!

Comment by Aleesha on 03/11/09
Although I have read many similar stories I still enjoy them. Your story was very good but you could have continued until Jeri became a complets woman.

Comment by Aleesha on 10/28/08
Another entertaining story. Thanks

Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/12/01
An interesting concept for a story. Something that I think could happen with out too much trouble on the part of either the parent or the son, soon to be daughter. I enjoyed the authors use of the internet and the way it figured in with the transformaiton of the main character.



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