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Vegas Girl
by Paul Insf

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
DHpCW6 What a joy to find smooene else who thinks this way.

Comment by crorkz linkz on 01/15/15
Lk8ezd Great website. Lots of helpful info here. I'm sending it to a few friends ans additionally sharing in delicious. And obviously, thanks to your sweat!

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
PeBahb Appreciate you sharing, great article.Really thank you! Will read on...

Comment by Brenda on 04/17/06
One of the best iv'e read. got me hot and horny from the start. i loved the reference to tia carrera to give me visual stimulation.

Comment by Mike on 07/03/02
Now you've done it!  What is all of the other authors to do to top this story?

Comment by Mina on 04/27/01
Very well done, Great style & linguistic grace.One of the best erotic short stories I have ever read on the site, Kudos and good luck on your future projects.....Mina  



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