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Unspoken Love
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Comment by Mariah on 05/08/13
Nice story Janet, when the only words Carolyn's mother could speak to her were "pretty girl" that delivered a strong conformation to Janet and her father that they both needed to hear. I could be wrong but mom probably knew all along that her son was really meant to be her daughter. Comment by Aleesha on 12/30/09 Another great story Janet, Carolyn was very lucky to have had an understanding and generous father but more importantly she was able to live out her dream of becoming a girl. Comment by trying to understand on 12/27/08 The story was good. However, why do you insist on 16 year olds going to night clubs. Stop and think before you write. A 16 yr old is too young to drink and in this story a 16 yr old was assaulted even though the assailant was stopped. If you must put your characters at a night club at least make them 18 or the legal age in your state. I am trying to read these stories to try to understand why individuals become tg. The reason for this is I am an ordained minister and I do not want to judge but to understand in order that if I have to counsel someone with this need, that I will be able to help them instead of prejudging them. However, I cannot condone a 16 yr old going to night clubs, unless it is one of those clubs designed for teenagers with non-alcoholic drinks and there is clean fun. Work this indea into your stories instead of the alcohol driven clubs. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/26/07 UNSPOKEN LOVE< is what we all need. Now she neds to complete her journey as she marries Bill and becomes a woman Comment by Carolyn Renee on 02/15/05 Another lovely story that makes me very envious. Thank you so much for stoking my imagination! Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee Comment by emmie dee on 01/06/01 Another good story of a teen given the love and support needed to successfully transition. I appreciated the portrayal of a more complex set of family dynamics than in many of our stories. Emmie Comment by Tricia on 01/01/01 Janet, Thanks for another great story. Alyssa's comments are so apt. Comment by Alyssa Davis on 12/30/00 Excellent story, Janet. Well written without sex, magic, or Sci Fi. Comment by Nellie D on 12/30/00 Another fine story from Janet with her usual style of ending. Comment by Eileen on 12/30/00 A very gentle and gracious story, as always. But honestly, this business of the inevitable boyfriend and possible marriage at the end is becoming a cliche with your stories. They all end the same way. You might try something different... Comment by paul jutras on 12/30/00 Love the backfired plan and how everything worked out. |
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