BpWOCi in the daylight, as i enjoy to find out more and more.

My body temperature raised steadily, as the story continued. What a lucky gurl!

WOW, if only this could happen to me

good story intresting and busy

A nice story with lots of love.  I really enjoyed reading it although it was hard without paragraphs.  

Yikes my eyes are sore this story needs paragraphs can someone fix this and then let me know thats . .

Great story, absolutely one of my favorites on this site. I especially enjoyed the suspense in it and the combination of domination with tender emotions. Sweet and sexy, nice going.

Nicely written story,especially as its your first. I much prefer this style of story to those of a more violent or belittling nature. Any chance of furthering this story and further ones of a similar nature? Well done regardless.

Very well done. I must say that I hope you will make future installments of this story. It has started off quite well. Excellent job for a first time. :)

For a first effort, a very entertaining and well thought out story. Hope you have more in the future!

Thanks to all for your kind comments.

I will try write Part two or maybe a completely new one

Alan,

Nice job!  How I envied David.  I'm sure I'm not alone.  Keep the stories coming.  Your first is a good omen of other to follow!  Good luck!

Some guys have all the luck!

I loved your stoty please write more.
Hugs
Ashley

Good story Alan,.. I love the crossdresser being accepted stories,.. well written,.. please make more:-},..

An excellent story It is a change to see a story where girls accept a male in such a fashion. Usually they only try to humilate them but here they are willing to accept his choice and to make the best of it. Looking forward to more.

Sue

I really enjoyed your story and would love to read part two. As you have left lots of room to elaborate and to build on
how Ann and Julie feminize him more.

brilliant, never read about someone taking it to that exteme...about not meeting the humiliation.....that so many are afraid of.

This is one of the best "first" TG stories I have read. I liked the way the women dress David and especially the slow seduction.
Thank you for the posting and keep up the good work.
Josie

a very good story with 2 understanding women what a way to go you can imagine how it going go on from this brilliant more please

Well what a terrific story and when can we have the sequel.  Send him out shopping dressed with the ladies and let him get the confidence to go out side.  Lots to add to the sequel, going dancing, going to the doctors and even going to night school.

Keep up the good work

loved the story,let's have some more

IT was a great story and i hated to se it end  so quickly, i am dieing to find out what happened at breakfast please write the ending.

Super, lots of room to elaborate and build on.  Keep it up.

A very beautiful story with a hint of truthfulness,write more.

an interesting story excellent for a first you could expand this more by increasing the line ie hormones and other female items plus more bondage and in the end becoming a ladys maid or slave

an interesting story excellent for a first you could epand this more by increasing the line ie hormones and other female items plus more bondage and in the end becoming a ladys maid or slave

Great story Alan. I love this type story. I do hope there is a 2nd chapter. It seemed so real. I wish I was the man. I'm a crossdresser and wish I could be involved in something like that. I would be submissive to what ever and enjoy every minute of it. Great story.

Really enjoyed your story. Well done.Perhaps spread the lines out a little to make reading a little easier and would love to have found out what Julie did forwith/to him.
Look forward to reading the next chapter
Evonne

I want more of this story in my opinion it is not yet finish Please add more!

I have the same comments as Amber...you need to format better, with many more breaks, so your text becomes easier to read.

Very well written. Very sensistive.  You have talent please don't keep it hidden. Good job.

Hi Alan. I just read your first story "The Uniform." Very interesting and captivating story. maybe you should write a Part 2 or maybe a sequel.

Barb

A very impressive first story. It is very nice to know that there are people out there who have compasion and understanding rather then Hatred and/or self loathing. A great storyline with lots of opportunity for sequels. I, for one, hope that you write them.

                             Best of everything,

                                      D.A.R

Not bad at all for your first one

loved your story, keep it up

Beautiful story.  Hope to see more.

I just loved your story and can't wait to see where it will lead.  I am jealous and wish that it had happened to me.

great story! as a crossdresser i love stories where women accept a man in panties and lingerie.

This is great.  Every girl's fantasy.  What a wonderful story you have written, please don't let it be the last.

Very good start. I can't wait to find out where this leads.

I want to see a complete feminization including living and working 24/7 as a girl.  Keep it up!!

what can I say? MORE MORE MORE. excellente. wish I could write this good. I have to be content to just read.

I loved your story.  Wish it were me.  Keep up the good work!!

I am a romantic, so I love storys that have heart in them. This is a fine first effort but you haven't allowed the love in you to get free.IMHO. I;m looking forward to your future writings, PLEASE DON'T STOP!!.   Sally.

So this is your first story? Well i must say it's pretty good I'd love to read more about how Ann and Julie feminize him more.
 Keep up the good work and I hope to be reading more.
                     Dixie

Fabulous first story, I like the way the initial attempt to capture turns to loving acceptance. Keep writing!

Please format and well make more paragraphs instead of a couple large ones.