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The Ultimate Infiltrator
by Prudence Walker

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/03/12
Very good story, as always Prue!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by merlin070 on 06/22/01
excellent, i just can't wait for the next part

Comment by Cowboy Poet on 06/12/01
Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
No one writes stories,
As good as Prue.


<Grin>

Comment by Rose2 on 06/09/01
Hi Boss, nice storystill not talking about your past but the Secret Agent Types seemed to know you well.  HHHhhmmmmmmm.  We are always glad to see you in action.  Your stories never fail to satisfy.  Once again My Heroine.  Rose2  

Comment by Andrea Foster on 06/08/01
Ultimate Infiltrator is a pacey, well written story, and I certainly enjoyed it. I find though that this kind of transformation technology is a bit too "Hey Presto" to be fully satisfying.

I like the thriller genre. It's underused in TG fiction, possibly because it is challenging from a plot development point of view. It's interesting to compare this story with Darkside's Fury stories.


Comment by Mr Man on 05/30/01
Part three builds on the solid foundation Prue laid in chapter one. This is a good story that continues to get better. I'm glad we have hard working people like Prue to keep us entertained with such fine stories. Thanks for writing.

Comment by Kelly Davidson on 05/14/01
Just got done with part 2 -- wow, did this story just take off.  I'm wondering what they plan to do next to turn Keith back to whom he once was.  Doesn't seem like they can without his DNA sample.  Now he has the ablity to change into anyone he wants -- what a cool idea.  Can't wait to see where part 3 leds to.

Comment by Kelly Davidson on 05/13/01
I just got done reading part 1 -- wow, what a story.  I can't wait to read part 2 and find out who these agents are that are after them.  Something tell me Keith is in for a bumpy ride.

Comment by Kim EM on 05/13/01
This is a wonderful extension to the HuggleBugs concept.  Prue, this is a great start!  My only problem with the story is -- I have to wait for the next part!

- Kim

Comment by Mr Man on 05/13/01
This is part two to what might turn out to be Prue's best work yet. I urge anyone out there to read it. You won't be sorry. Thanks for the story Prue.

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 05/10/01
I'm speechless!  I'm flabbergasted!  I'm. I'm, I'm.....        Prue, you continue to fulfill my words by getting better and better with each new story you write.  I knew you would be good but, girl, you have surpassed my expectations and will, no doubt, if you haven't already, outstrip me in both counter numbers and quality of storytelling.  Many well deserved kudos on this new one, Prue.  I continue to be amazed at the inventiveness of your imagination and I look forward to the day when I see one or more of your stories in REAL print.  Congrats, m'luv.  You done REAL good!
                    Cathy_t_ said that, with love and huggles  

Comment by Heather Sinclair on 05/10/01
Wonderful new spin. Keep the new ideas coming.

Comment by Mr Man on 05/10/01
This looks like the beginning of something good and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I like the new technology and the potential it brings to your storyline. Thanks for writing!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/09/01
Good Hugglebugs universe start. Look forward t owhat's next.



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