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Twas the Night Before Easter
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Joan Banks on 01/23/01
Truly a sweet story.  It would be wonderful to experience life over again as the proper sex.

Comment by Rose2 on 01/20/01
 Sweet, sentimental and fun.  A win win story all around.

Comment by Heather St. Claire on 01/20/01
This was really nice! Sentimental, sweet, happy, and a dream we can all relate to! Thanks for sharing it.

Comment by Terry on 01/20/01
This is a cute story, Paul.  I do have one question:  I thought the parents became 12 years old or was it a short duration of a few hours in the evening in order to place the eggs?  I was a little confused about that.



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