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Travestina
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by best pron on 12/21/18
65EX4g It as nearly impossible to find educated people on this subject, however, you sound like you know what you are talking about! Thanks

Comment by Fancy Nancy on 04/19/08
Muy dulce!  Which of us wouldn't want to spend a week or longer in a Spanish village garbed in a silk blouse with short puffed sleeves, long, flowing silken skirt, and long tight-bunned combed hair with a precious white lacy mantilla?  Muchas gracias, Paula! - Nancita

Comment by JosieP on 07/26/06
Beautiful story, well crafted. Thank you!

Comment by Diane Sutton on 10/17/01
Not the typical story that I have read on this site. I enjoyed the way the story was told and the way the author has the ability to make even a short story very interesting.

Comment by Petra on 06/17/01
Very sweet.  Enjoyed it.

Comment by Amanda on 06/14/01
Beautiful and charming a lovely fantasy.



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