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Trapped
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Comment by Silvia. on 03/28/12
Ridiculous and disgusting. Comment by juliej on 02/22/08 brilliant story more please Comment by Paul GF on 09/27/07 I wish to add that i wish it was me as well! Oh those wonderful powerful and evil girls!!!! Comment by Paul G F on 09/27/07 A fantastic story. Parts 1 & 2 could stand as individual stories in their own right. But part 3 is a masterpiece It continues the story but better! How the girls get their revenge is clever and evil. I adore the 'trapped dress' and bondage touches!! Comment by juliej on 12/17/06 this again is a great story i have re read all parts trogether i was surprised the girls let him of with a choice it would have been different if it was me &i would have made brian wear girls panties as well &kept him like it good story more please, i wish it was me Comment by julie j on 08/07/05 this part is just as good as previous i would like to know his decision at the end of the night and what the girls plan to do with him after to stop him in his habit well done Comment by julie j on 11/05/04 great story caught right in the act who said girls are not devious to set a trap like that takes some doing its a word to the wise that says unless things get put back right the girls will notice and as we have just read set a trap he was lucky it could have got a lot worse well done Comment by Bobbie on 03/08/04 Great story. Comment by Angel on 03/08/04 After four years you decide to continue this story. Thanks! Never give up! Comment by Dick Dunham on 03/07/04 Still enjoying it. Hope you continue or write another similar one. I liked the trapped in dress theme. Comment by Colleen on 01/05/04 Loved your story so far. Please continue..Colleen Comment by john on 04/30/01 God I,m really loving this story, please carry on |
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