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A Town Called Hope
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Comment by Stephen on 07/06/11
wow another home run , I would drive to hope myself just to find Gypsy.You are a linguistic Artist .And I but an admirer. Comment by Silvia. on 09/09/10 I Agree with Jezzi Belle Stewart. Comment by Peggy Sue on 08/04/08 a cheery fantasy with a lot of good wisdom. I especially vibrated to the part about the idolizing of an imperfect father. Truly, without self-love, I am as nothing Comment by juliej on 03/04/05 a good name for a story i feel that i will have to come back to read this again at a later date to understand this prportly i realise it a work of fiction its intresting but hard to comprhend i will comment further at a later stage once i have re read it again Comment by Vivien on 12/28/04 Good story! I can just imagine how Tom felt when he woke up bound and gagged, I think! Well noone can unless that has happened to them really. But I do understand how he felt before it all happened! A nowhere job and a nowhere life. It's how I have felt for years and am currently looking and will find my new job and life whether in drag or drab it does'nt matter. Well I think I prefer drag or rather enfemme if you prefer the word choice! This story I really like because it has caused me to do some more thinking about my future choices that I must make for myself and soon! Good story Ann! Comment by Josie on 01/15/03 Beautiful concept (oh, if only there was Hope...). Well-written, original, engaging character, just a great read, and this applies to all your Hope stories/parts. Thank you! Comment by DeeDee Clark on 10/13/02 What a beautiful dream. if only it were possible. It was sort of a re-birth of the human spirit. I liked the part where someone said, You can't love anyone until you love yourself. I think that is true. Comment by Nellie D on 07/13/01 The story concluded nicely with the happiness of two people who had had a lot of sadness before. Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 07/13/01 Liked the way the story developed. And especially HUGE Comment by SaraUK on 07/09/01 HI Ann Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 07/07/01 I agree that the story starts out very strange. But one thing I've Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/07/01 Tom's way too trusting. How can anyone be gullible enough to trust strangers who drug you, dress you in femme clothes, and then restrain and gag you - Then tell you it might put fun back in your life! I agree with Nora that him sticking with Cris and Andrea for long is the least plausible scenario to do him good. You've emphasized that he's pretty smart, I see Tom most likely deciding that now that he knows what the problems are, he will seek help from someone else, someone of his own choosing. I wonder what these "benevolent" ladies will do if he makes that "wrong" choice (to leave)? Comment by Nellie D on 07/06/01 This has the feel of being a different style story. I wonder where it is going and how Tom will react. The town just seems to pop out of nowhere when he is having problems, somewhat reminesent of Ovid. And Gypsy who seems to know so much, maybe a very strong psychic or other para-normal. Hopefully this will help Tom not hurt him. Comment by Nora Deret on 07/06/01 hi Anne, |
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