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Too Far
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Comment by Kevrel on 10/23/12
A muntie saved is a minute earned, and this saved hours! Comment by this is me on 08/03/12 I have a problem with any establishment that harps on personal responsibility and foists irresponsible representatives of said establishment upon others. For instance incarceration now infers an added punishment of rape while in custody. Such administration has the ethical duty to insure the wellbeing of their charges to the extent that such expectations never become commonplace. I would say sadly such administration doesn't take their responsibility nearly as serious as it should. Comment by this is me on 08/03/12 The implication that women live civilized lives and men don't can't be lost. That sentiment earns my contempt; it always does. 'An ounce of deterrence is worth a pound of cure'. If they had told him the ramifications of his rebelliousness I venture to say it would adequately work as a deterrent. I would say any directorship would have an ethical responsibility to divuldge such ramifications; they are, afterall, a standard disciplinary response. Comment by Silvia. on 09/08/11 Very,very good story. Comment by Maybelle on 08/19/09 Title could well be "Tamed, But Not Yet Done." Comment by Dianna on 04/09/08 Too far indeed. But who went too far? Comment by Anthony on 03/26/07 I really enjoyed this story, as I did the previously written stories. Comment by Vivien on 01/01/07 Yes, by all means continue this story and tell me where this school is too! LOL! Comment by Ronnie Johnson on 11/18/06 I just finished reading your story 'Too Far' and really enjoyed it. I hope you complete it as it has a very interesting story line and the 'Bad Boy to Good Girl' could have a fantastic story and ending. Comment by julie j on 10/29/04 a good story heavy to get into and understand what was happening Comment by Diane Sutton on 06/14/02 I enjoyed reading a story that keeps my interest and a long one is just what's needed now and then. Comment by Seedeedoublyou on 10/03/01 Sick sick sick. I feel so sorry for this kid :-( He should have rebeled and turned against that rotten school and burned it down or worse.. |
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