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Tara's Prom
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by Rone Welles on 10/17/06
......One of the sweetest nicest lovely complete story I have read in a long time ....the author is to be proud of this work ...

thank you for sharing with us ....  

Peace Rone


Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 06/07/04
Dear Janis Elizabeth,

This is the first story of yours, that I've read. It is beautiful and heart-warming. It's a, "feel good," story. It is nicely written with enough adjectives to create the, "word-pictures," which are needed to create the scene in the reader's mind. I grew up with radio, not televison. This is a tale which brought me, "into," the story. Thus, for a while I was Tammy/Tim and that made me feel good inside. Now it's time for reality and sleep but you can be sure, that I'll be visitng your author's page. However, I haven't checked your, "author's page," yet. Hence, hope that you've written more than just this one story.

Huggles,

Susan Pauline Bauer

Comment by Annie O on 04/22/01
You are one of the few I will download stories to read later. I can always trust your writings--they match my fantasies! I do hope you intend to write many more!

Comment by Amanda on 04/21/01
Sweet sentimental. Nothing graphic. I liked it a lot.

Comment by Nellie D on 04/20/01
Another fine story from Janis. The well written is rich with detail and description. The love that is evident within this family is something most of us need.

Comment by emmie dee on 04/20/01
What a gentle, innocent, lovely little story! I really enjoyed it.

Comment by Cordelia on 04/20/01
All I have to say is I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! Well also very jealous of Tim.
Enjoy your weekend Miss Sharon. Adoration and Love Cor

Comment by Paula Jutras on 04/20/01
Sweet well done story that was an over joy to read. Keep up the sweet and sentimental stories like this.

Comment by Jennifer on 04/20/01
Really sweet. As always you surrond your heroine with understanding women/girls.  This is a little different in that 'she' went hetrosexual.

well handled.



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