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Surprise, Baby
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by Silvia on 09/15/11
Ricki and Marie should be arrested and hanged for what they did to Mark and Mel
Sickly and disgusting story.

Comment by Ronnie on 08/20/09
Lovely story - almost made me cry.

Comment by Michele on 01/20/08
Rachel,

That was an absolutely fantastic story.  I personally know someone who fits the character Ricki and desires to the opportunity to swap places into a real woman and experience child birth.  I like to see more of the change as Mark becomes Liz and the completion of Melisa (or is it Melinda) to womanhood.  

You are a great writer.  Please keep sending more stories like this one.  For now, I'll read the other stories you've already posted.

Thanks,
Shelly




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